| Reviews for Wrong |
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SeiyaAria chapter 1 . 3/24/2018 What the fuck This is so sad |
Fangrill3 chapter 1 . 4/4/2017 Oh my god. I was right. Takano is carrying onodera's corpse around. That is all kinds of messed up O.o I don't know if i should be creeped out or feel sorry for him. The writing was good though. |
Holy crap chapter 1 . 1/4/2016 Wait I'm not sure if I'm understanding correctly but does he have his dead body with him? Oh my goodness. You made me all happy at the beginning then... UAEIRWUHELA |
Saber Wing chapter 1 . 11/8/2015 Oh. Oh God. That was wonderful. Horrible, but wonderful. I was not expecting that at all. Beautifully twisted and tragic, though I have to ask the same question others have. He wasn't actually dragging the body around with him, was he? My best guess is that he merely imagines Ritsu is with him at work, and keeps his body at home. Maybe he smuggled it from the grave somehow or something? I just...whatever, this was wonderful. I know I've said that a lot, but I don't run into a lot of people willing to write things like this, and seeing as I've done so myself, it's nice to find a kindred spirit :) |
thesecretmuffin chapter 1 . 8/8/2015 I would never actually want this to happen to them and I don't usually like reading stories like this but it was great and kind of creepy. |
Gaki nerd chapter 1 . 7/29/2015 I really like how this story shows dark emotions you can actually feel it. I saw that a lot of people were thinking that Ritsu is dead but i feel as that's not the case. I think he is still alive but went through a horrible accident and Tanko san feel its his fault. My second guess is that Ritsu is actually dead and its all in Takano san is just imaging it all and he just has the dead body of Ritsu in his house. |
27lablover chapter 1 . 7/7/2015 CHILLS! Omfg this gave me chills. Agh! So creepy! But I'm a tad confused. Was Takano actually dragging around a body for two years or was it just in his head or what? I mean, wouldn't the body decay or smell, and wouldn't Takano get arrested or thrown in an asylum or something for toting around a dead body? Sorry. I'm just a little curious. Oh well! This was a fantastic story! I don't review on your stories as much as I should. I absolutely love your writing! You are my favorite writer for this ship, maybe even this fandom, hands down. Keep up the marvelous work. I will jump with joy at the chance to read more of your writing. |
TheLittleEditor chapter 1 . 6/12/2015 Good story. And I can feel Takano's pain, he loves Ritsu so much that he won't even let death take him away. I was crying, but I loved the fic. :) |
Gemini Central Station chapter 1 . 6/5/2015 O Shit suspence wat gonna happen next |
Tigerlillyth chapter 1 . 6/1/2015 Ouh wow... I'm just too mindblown to actually think straight now... |
NORWEGlAN chapter 1 . 5/8/2015 this is so fukin creepy but AMAZING omfg |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2015 I like it but I have trouble understanding what is happening. Has Takano been dragging around a dead body or is it just his imagination? Could someone please clarify what is going on. (、ン、) |
broccolishadow66 chapter 1 . 5/5/2015 That was so creepily amazing. I really enjoyed it! 3 |
hayunaki chapter 1 . 5/4/2015 OH GOD THAT WAS GREAT |