Aww this was beautiful and quite good :), please please continue too many people are only doing one shots :(.

This was nice. I liked it. I'm glad you updated. And throwing Tony in was a good idea. I feel like you did him well, even though he didn't talk as much as usual. I'm not complaining. :)
Keep up the good work.

-BtFM

Great! They are getting along!

Awwwwwwwwwwww!

Update this, I love it

Yes. Yes. Yes. I like how you did this. The hulk action was amazing by the way. And them talking at the end was just what I expected. I love it.

Wow what an amazing chapter! Please keep up the good work and please update soon! I'm looking forward to it!

Thank you thank you! I'm so happy that you decided to write another chapter... how about one more? Or ten more is fine too :)

Great follow up. Great way of adapting the story to fit the new version of the line. And it makes sense you may have to "simplify" the language for the big guy. The sun is setting probably doesn't make sense to him.

I really wanna see them from bruce pov now. That would be epic. Mostly because I wanna see the drone bit and the triggered change.

Sadly, I feel you should have used the exact phrasing from the movie "The sun's getting real low.' to be more effective. And Rogers cursing? Totally ooc in my book. Other than that the story was well told. I like that their relationship changed after her experiment,

Great chapter! I loved it! Please update soon! Looking forward to what's in store in the next chapter!

Loved this backstory

This was a cute one-shot. I imagine it did go something like this off-screen. You have a very firm grasp of their personalities, which is great. The only thing I didn't like was the last sentence. It just needed something more, or something different. The ending is just as important as the beginning, even if it's for something short like this.

I do like your style, and I think you have a lot of potential for a writer. Keep it up.

-BtFM