very excellent piece of work and very realistic :)

I'm sad that Lucius and his wife lost their daughter, but I'm happy that Lucius didn't turn out like his father.

:D

Good job thing in this story with the other ones in your series. I like that Lucius thinks about what it'd be like to have a daughter, but tries to be happy with just having a son. It also shows a little insight to why he does what he does when he's in the war. (Trying to protect Draco) good job again