| Reviews for In the Beginning |
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   degrassijayandalex chapter 1 . 6/11/2009 Great on shot and also i like it that dom's dad goes over to letty's house and gets her also i feel so bad for letty that she is so scared and then she wakes up in the middle of the night screaminng. Also i liked the ending when dom walks over where his dad and letty are and letty smiles up at him and he said he would make her happy till the day that he died! ) great one shot and i think that you should think about either adding on to this or making another fan fiction about dom and letty! ) |
| Ember Darla chapter 1 . 4/13/2009 Thats so cute, i love it. |
| AutumnDreaming chapter 1 . 3/20/2008 This is a piece with deep emotional content but told in character for Dom. It reveals the long history that welded the core of the group (Dom, Mia, and Leddy) together, and also fleshes out the full extent of the loss of Dom's and Mia's father had on them, and why Dom felt such responsibility for them. It also expresses a seed of anger that was going to rise up in Dom later on. Very well written, well conceived, and tastefully executed. Great job! I would love to read more. -Autumn |
| Tangilass chapter 1 . 3/17/2008 *sniffles* perfect! |
| CoolestGrlUkno chapter 1 . 9/3/2007 HOLY CRAP! This was THE BEST pre Fast and the Furious story I've EVER read! |
| china5 chapter 1 . 12/30/2002 great story girl I hope you keep it up.. |
| Tashana Ambrosia chapter 1 . 12/17/2002 Very sweet. I love the description through Dom's eyes. You've got a wonderful start to this one. Keep up the great work! *Smiles* Tashana Ambrosia |
| JamieRae chapter 1 . 12/15/2002 What a sweet story! You've got some amazing talent, I can't wait to see what else you write. |
| LittleLetty chapter 1 . 12/15/2002 AWW! That was so good, But NO NO NO YOU CANT STOP! THAT WOULD BE MEAN! COLD IT TELL YOU! I reallly think you have a goooood start and you must continue...and if you dont, ill do it for you. PLEASE! im begging you! Good job! MORE! |
| Elizabeth12 chapter 1 . 12/14/2002 That babe was unbelievable! I loved it and I hope that you decide to write more to this or another story cause your a great writer! |
| Tigerlily Deepdelver chapter 1 . 12/14/2002 this is really good tigerlily |
| greenglowchassis chapter 1 . 12/14/2002 this is so GOOD! i really liked it! that whole part with her dad was really disturbing, but so well written. i just wanted to know if you were hinting towards sexual abuse with the almost no clothes and the "you like it when we-" part. email me |
| LJ chapter 1 . 12/14/2002 Beautifully sweet story, very... childhood. |
| Savage Midnight chapter 1 . 12/14/2002 This sounds like an interesting story. It'd be great if it was progressed furthur :) Good job, keep it up. |
| lulu chapter 1 . 12/14/2002 Man...that was really good. The emotions, descriptions. He fell for her...you just knew he would. Very nice! :) -LuLu |
