Hm...even though this is early into the fic, I fell like Sora should have been able to use more spells than just fire ball? At what point of kingdom hearts is this?

This fic was a rollercoaster of feelings. Like I almost screamed every time Jason got hurt. While reading the fic I was wondering why is there no Moggle or why items were not used, but while reading through, it occurred to me that the items would be a big cheat to the whole journey and take away some realism it brings. Something that isn’t normally shown in Kingdom Hearts games.

I wished that there was more to the final chapter. Like some reactions to the explanation of the journey, or something that would make Batman give Jason and Dick a big hug for what they have gone through. Though what was received in the end is equally satisfying.

Take care.

This is AWESOME! .
Hope there will be villains from Arkham in this besides Joker. Like Harley, Ivy, Two Face, Penguin, Riddler, Scarecrow, Ventriloquist, Bane, Killer Croc, and moooooore.

And hope that Sora will meet Batman.
Also, where is Goofy and Donald?

Also, I'm GLAD that there is no romance or worse in here. On to le next chappie!

Poor Sora, so out of his depth in Gotham City. He's basically a Cosplayer. Who's been called out by other cosplayers. And whoa, instant belief that he's an alien/space superhero? O.O Sora is really out of his element.

Oh, Dick XD Epitome Big Brother.

Man, the islands must be pretty sheltered. Sora wouldn't last a day in Gotham.

It's so exciting to see Jason make his appearance via saving Sora. And then he gets annoyed when he's saddled with looking after him. Sorry, Jason, you save it, you buy it.

And yeah, it's highly hypocritical for Nightwing to object to Sora vigilanting when he started as a nine year old. Then again, he was in costume. He probably thinks Sora is a normal civilian, new to the game. And that's not entirely inaccurate :P

Dude I understand if sora is supposed to be happy go lucky and a bit of a d under head but seriously he isn't that stupid other than that great story though

stop talking about the weather...Jason could have shot you fifty times with the length of that AN

hmmm...heartless and Nobody version of Jason, this should be interesting

interesting fight scene, I also liked how Robin ever so nonchalantly raided Red Hoods weapon store lol

Loved Nightwing's trolling that was epic XD

This was a good story to read, and it got me pumped for KHIII. I loved how even though the focus was mostly on Dick and Jason, that you still gave Sora, Riku, even Kairi plenty of development, even giving Sora a new Drive Form at the end. I know your not going to do a sequel, but maybe you try some one shots of the Keyblade Wielders time in Gotham.

i gotta say i stuck with this from beginning to end and it was fantastic. i hope you decide to write more, whether a sequel, a KH fic, a Batman fic, or otherwise. you're both awesome and i hope you have a wonderful day.
Cheers,
Lily

great chapter. and i'm glad i'm identifiable.

great chapter. will there be a sequel?

What? Is Sora like a little kid or something because I highly doubt that at 15 or 16 that terms like Dickface would make him say things like "that's not nice" it sounds like he's never heard stuff like that and Sora is innocent but not so innocent that I'm pretty sure he would know that's he's being threatened. What, is he so out of shape after jumping long distances and taking on giant monsters that he can't even take on some heartless honestly speaking he's probably as athletic if not more then Red Hood or Nightwing. Also did you have to really have to put there is no romance, as long as you don't bracket the names then I'm sure it's obvious. Ugh some fic.