| Reviews for What It Means To Be The Mandarin |
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   DeathKing24712 chapter 12 . 12/3/2018 Poor Church... :/ I don't even know him.. except that his name is related to religions... I kinda feel pity for him KINDA |
| DeathKing24712 chapter 10 . 12/2/2018 It's well done... i actually learned a few things about the Halo Universe in this Fanfic :) So kudos to you bro... Ultron though... i wonder how powerfull it has become... especially now that it's literally surrounded by REALLY advanced tech. Leagues above the original earth's tech... Damnn... i can only imagine... _ |
| DeathKing24712 chapter 9 . 12/2/2018 ... Ahhhhh the Soothing feeling of guilt and sadness.. Such a Relaxing Feeling... Grest job in the drama part... :) Lit Chapter |
| DeathKing24712 chapter 8 . 12/2/2018 Woww... As always great chapter... and also nice intro to the weapon of the celestials... I noticed a few mistakes here and there.. but that's understandable... After all.. you could be writing these stories in your phone like i do... |
| DeathKing24712 chapter 7 . 12/2/2018 It's slow not show... Anyways... a nicely crafted tradgedy chapter... :) Nicely Done Indeed... felt the despair of the group as they talked... I can now safely say you have improved _ By a large margin... |
| DeathKing24712 chapter 6 . 12/2/2018 ... Again just to remind you... i like using Damn... don't judge _ (creepy eyes) But Damnnnnnnnn Another Lit Chapter... the Fight Scene was both funny and awesome... haha... especially that Bitch Slap hahaha... totally deserved it... :D That Iron Man Look - a like though... i'm not to sure of what to expect in the next chapter... But as always... great chapter... barely any mistakes... Good Job :) CIAO! |
| DeathKing24712 chapter 5 . 12/2/2018 Lol... this Chapter was Hilarious... .. Butch Flowers... wow... flowers... :D But ain't gonna judge... if he likes flowers.. well then... flowers it is.. :D Lol.. seriously.. Great Chapter Again... i spotted a few Errors and mistakes but all in all... Top Notch Chapter :) |
| DeathKing24712 chapter 4 . 12/2/2018 Hehehehahahahahaahaha... you can be pretty damn cruel when you want too. Hahaha... The Fight was Epic btw! But damn... poor Texas... :D Well like they always say.. "Karma's a Bitch" Hahaha... that surely fits as the Chapter's Name... O |
| DeathKing24712 chapter 3 . 12/2/2018 I know what's going on... Badass Ultron is Somewhat Controlling Texas! Yep... that is now confirmed especially since she's a supposed A.I. controlled Robot |
| DeathKing24712 chapter 2 . 12/2/2018 I feel pity for young Naruto :D Kicked in the Nuts.. ow... by a trained soldier no less... that must feel like a nut cracker :D Get it? |
| DeathKing24712 chapter 1 . 12/2/2018 Damnnnnn ... This chapter.. has Blown me mind! I sense and see NO grammar and spelling mistakes... at least from what i see.. Damn now i REALLY want to know the story of HALO ... it sounds amazing _ the halo of an angel... O Wooooowwww... anyway... Great Start To This Story _ I look forward to Reading It... Also Keep Up the Good Work :) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2017 Love it just please make it a lite longer |
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/4/2017 Amazing |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/25/2017 Your story has such potential but then you start making crap upland altering canon all willy nilly for no reason |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/25/2017 This story has so much potential but your grammar is shit mate please find a competent beta reader and edit your stories so they can be truly enjoyes |
