Aww, what? How am I just now finding this? This is so good!

I liked this story I really liked how you betrayed Shego as a logical, mature, experience woman that has control over what she's feeling and thinks of the long run not the here and now. I love reading Kigo, but I get tired of people betraying Shego as this love struck, hurt, depress, broken woman that would give up her entire life just to be loved by Kim Possible I'm just like...OKAY /. It makes more since to me for Kim to be the one pining over Shego because Kim is a hormonal teenage girl that thinks she knows everything (like all teenagers do) and still trying to figure out her sexuality meaning she can easily get a girl crush meeting somebody as cool as Shego. I really liked how Shego was questioning herself too after sleeping with Kim and how that could effect her criminal career if people think she's a perverted love sick pedo, which I thought was really good inner conflict and I loved her choice at the end she was going on feelings like Kim she was going from logic and knew it what would happen to her and Kim if she even consider a relationship with her. Like I said I love KIGO Kim and Shego make more since to me then Kim and Ron because all he did was hang around her all her life so nobody else can get an inch between them like ever co-character "childhood friend," does in ever disney show. Only Korra and Adventure time had the balls to ship the people GL because it made since from the chemistry they had with each other not some cop out. Sorry for my ranting I don't have anything against Ron he's just that love interest that eventually happens 2-3 seasons later in every show lol.

Love it! Your fight choreo is pretty good. : ) A lot of people here goof that stuff up but you have a really good sense of pacing, and definitely spent some time imagining what you wanted it to look like.

The idea of giving Lynn mind control powers also worked really well for your story because it very easily isolated Kim and Shego from the rest of the cast. It kinda made me think of how much it would suck to be Adrenna Lynn in this case. Because she just got dope superpowers and then immediately blew it and now she'll be in prison way longer this time.

Looking at the fic overall, it starts off really strong. I love the first chapter and I think the way you make the interest Kim has for Shego is really good. Overall, that conflict of Kim being gay is solid. In terms of actual critique, and I know it's an older story now, and I know there's a sequel that I'm definitely reading, but you do wrap things up a little fast.

Shego & Kim's linguistic ballet works really well throughout but that last convo definitely needed a second to breathe with some narration. It's a sudden turn that needed a bit more backing to really hit hard. Especially given how slow the beginning is, we kinda go breakneck at the end and never stop. I wanted to feel Kim's heartbreak a bit more. The dialog back and forth kinda makes you lose track of Shego's voice specifically.

I also kinda wish Bonnie made a for real appearance in this fic? I like the idea of Kim & Bonnie's hook-up times but wish we actually saw some of it? It's almost more interesting than some of the actual scenes. Because that has a lot of potential to be pretty raw and powerful.

Sorry to leave such a long review. I write fic too and always blush when I get these haha.

this is going good so far. again good characterization, though I' do wonder about the bonnie thing. I could see them hate-sexing each other, but unless it was right after the "bonding" thing, not having an experimental fling, but that's probably just me

I thoroughly enjoyed this story and glad to see a sequel in progress. Without trying to spoil anything there are a lot of questions that I hope get answered in the sequel. I suppose I'll find out eventually. There are quite a handful of typos but they are easily ignored. One that stood out was the word ‘though’ but looked to mean ‘thought’. I blame the keyboard when I do thatThere were a few spots where I just didn't know the position of where the characters were. Like when Kim got blown back from Shego’s blast at the Hench factory where Adrena got her powers. Shego went to Kim to check on her, and Adrena came from behind, I wasn't sure how close they were I relation to each other. I assumed directly behind, but turned out she was much farther away. It was interesting to see a chapter dedicated to either Kim’s or Shego’s point of view along the same time frame, but I must admit, I didn't catch on right away. I assumed each chapter continued from the last. It wasn't that difficult to figure out, it just stopped the flow briefly. I don't speak for everyone, but I'm hoping they ‘figure something out’ to start a relationship beyond ‘enemies with benefits’. If not, oh well, I'll still enjoy the read of the sequel.

Excellent story. Just started reading your stuff today, and couldn't put it down until I finished all of your stories, you're an amazing author. This one was my favourite, and definitely needs a sequel. There are so many ways you could continue this.

Nice story! Kim helping Shego escape was a nice touch, particularly the reason why. Seem our basic average girl isn't so basic or average after all. Kim getting a glow was a surprise and her reaction and worries about it were well done.

Kim's 'relationship' with Bonnie was a nice touch and almost begs to be explored more. So does Kim' relationship with Ron and with Shego. This could definitely use a sequel or prequel.

Ahhhhhhh how could you end it like that making she'll ripe her feeling apart the I must say this story was really good minus som mixed up letters every so often it was funny and kinda sweet in a way and Kim having powers was not something I was expecting.

In the next chapter shego finds out that drakken retired and left everything to her she then sold everything which will last her a lifetime so she could retire to then remembered what she said to kim and decided to apologize by any means necessary legal of course for kim then saw kim practicing her powers at first thought confused but thought if anyone other then me or my brothers I trust with a glow I'm glad it's kim instead of lynn shego appers infront of kim explaining what she thought and told her about retirement and wanted to very much apologize also heal the heart she broke because she came to terms that she loves kim, kim was happy shego accepted that she had a glow and retired so now they can be in a relationship regardless how anyone thinks if they found out but no one will

WUUUT?
Where is more of this story? Definitly needs to be more! No way can Kim keep that secret and no way
Shego can just walk it off!

Having enjoyed the first chapter of "Conference Affair" so much, I looked into your earlier work.

Overall, I like this story a lot. The ending makes me sad for Kim, of course, but it's realistic and not unexpected. You set it up well with Shego's thoughts at the top of chapter 7. Shego is necessarily cruel in their final scene together, but a there are a lot of hints in the story that make me suspect she doesn't really mean it. And let's face it, this isn't much more emotional trauma than most high school kids have to deal with.

It's easy to see Shego knowing better, but not having the impulse control needed to say no to Kim.

There are two structural things that bother me about the story, though. Maybe I missed it, but I don't recall finding out how Kim knew when Shego was breaking out. She couldn't have been waiting there every night. Even Shego wonders (opening scene of chapter 3). That continued to be on my mind while reading the story.

And Kim's glow just kind of appears in the scene with her brothers. Again, maybe I missed the introduction. There's some foreshadowing, and Kim apparently knows it's there, but we haven't seen it. I think that needs to have been brought out earlier. As soon as she became aware, Kim would have been trying to learn about it.

Those two things detract from the story for me. The second could have been handled with an additional paragraph in the story. The first would require a plot point, and it not being my story I have no idea how you might have dealt with it. Maybe some kind of predictive behaviour noticed by Wade?

There could easily be a sequel to this, and I have at least two trains of thought on how it might go, neither of which would likely be how you would write it. However you did it, I expect I would enjoy it.

Aw, that was ... really super sad. Probably the most realistic outcome of any liaison they could have, though. In any case, it doesn't make me like Alone, Together any less. Thanks!

A sad ending makes me sad. I'll live, but I'll need lotsa comfort food. I'm not sure how to word it, but Shego felt pretty neutered. Fighting skills and plasma and she really didn't get to shine. I know, I know, it's not that sorts fic, but it just stood out to me. Kim managed to keep her secret safe, but all secrets have a way of seeping out no matter how hard we try.

I've read your story with interest and enjoyment! Good characterisations taking the known persons several steps towards well-rounded personalities. Action, feelings, the lot.

I understand that the ending fits into the general concept of the story. Brutal and realistic rather than fluffy happy ending.

OK - but I'm still very upset with Shego's cruel put-down of KP. Please, let there be an epilogoue giving Kimmie some hope! Or a follow up story! Please!

I believe some readers might complain that the Kim/Shego part ended with real conclusion but I believe you did all right the girls. Shego stayed true to her word and Kim soldiered on.
The conflict was well done and resolved with style. Ron and Felix were the a surprisingly good mix for Lynn and it did take teamwork between the girls to beat them.
So in the end they have some memories and future conflict possibilities and Ron has a chance as well. All is well that ends well.