Reviews for Gundam Build Fighters Try: Our Story Just Started
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16
It’s been 5 years... a continuation please!
Very good chapter 1 . 4/7/2019
Very good
gold crown dragon chapter 1 . 2/26/2018
why not 10 15 tears thats enuf to have a child maybe?
Sanger-sequence chapter 1 . 5/29/2017
Welp, that was adorable.
shadowking83917 chapter 1 . 4/30/2017
Love it, it was just awsome do another one please
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2017
Please make sequel of this story, its great and interesting, really hope can read the sequel of this story
Septimastry chapter 1 . 8/25/2016
Man you really should make another sequel to this story or just shia x sekai in general. It's so well written and paced so it doesn't feel forced. We NEED A SEQUEL!
A Friend chapter 1 . 8/2/2016
I liked it
Yukine-ren chapter 1 . 2/20/2016
Can you make more stories about sekai x shia for I think they are suited for each other.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2016
Can you make more stories about shia and sekai pairing because there more perfect for each other.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2016
Is this a one shot or with more chapters yo come
sekaixshia chapter 1 . 5/29/2015
I have a lot of things to say, but first...
I NEED A SEQUEL FOR THIS STORY
I really like this because there's not enough sekaixshia fanfic and this story is nice because they're not ooc, so it feels real.
Besides a sequel for this story, I'd appreciate it if you make lots and lots more of sekaixshia fanfic. I really need more than this, god, I'm so obsessed.
Especially a scene where they go on a date, or shia visiting sekai's house, or special occasion (like valentine's day, christmas, etc) that would make me so happy- correction, all of sekaixshia's fans.
Overall I think this story is good and I love it, even though the grammars aren't perfect (tho I'm not one who should be commenting on that, bcs I'm also not really good in grammar)
Okay, sorry I talk too much, I'm just too excited about this. Anyway I really hope you will make the sequel and lots of sekaixshia stories!
Revengermajestyliberator chapter 1 . 5/9/2015
Ok... I'll be honest... I have zero clue about G Gundam... but you executed this story minus the grammar with perfection... wow... now I want to try one oneshot with this pairing... but then again... this is a great pairing... anywho I hope to see more of your stories :)
Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
Well, well, soldier...

Ok, let's get this out of the way first: the grammar. Ohhh my goodness, mother of Forerunner! (Swirly Eyes) Ok, the grammar and syntax in this story...it was not the best I've read, but trust me: I've read worse. Far worse.

Still, the grammar here was not a train wreck and I still found this story incredibly enjoyable, adorable, delightfully fluffy and hilariously cheesy and badass. LOL

I mean, seriously? That Gunpla Battle...I DEMAND an OVA be made for it! 8D

I mean, just...daaayuuum! That Gunpla Battle between Sekai and Shia was absolutely insane! And...well, G Gundam! That's all I can say. And yes. "G Gundam" is now an adjective, too. 8D

So, not-so-stellar grammar and such, this story was still amazing and fluffy and a fitting first story for this adorable, lovely couple of Shia and Sekia. *O* Stories like these give me hope that this fandom CAN produce love stories that feature characters from the ACTUAL "Gundam Build Fighters" canon instead of waves upon waves of OC stories. XD

So, that is one story down. Now, I long to read a proper SekaixFumina and SekaixGyanko story. X3

Great work, Marine!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Spartan719 chapter 1 . 5/4/2015
There is a few problems that I have with grammar and spelling but other than that, I actually enjoyed this fic. I can see Sekai actually noticing a girl's feelings through fighting. So please make a sequel, I really feel like that there should be more to this. Bravo.
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