| Reviews for Our Destiny |
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  RANDOMKID123 chapter 8 . 10/10/2019 UPDATE PLEASE |
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/26/2019 Finally |
 Halo Ash chapter 8 . 5/30/2018 Wow it's been a while since I read this, or any of your work for that matter. As always a great chapter. After many of the stories I follow being updated less and less, it's nice to see one pop up every now and then. |
| SkeletonKnight chapter 8 . 5/28/2018 Loved the chapter! Can't wait until the next update. Chapter was a little depressing but also a little heart warming. Dawn went to Ash for comfort. I can tell their relationship is improving since Dawn running Ash over. |
| ketchum09 chapter 8 . 5/27/2018 A very good chapter and to answer of your question , no I think Dawn don't want to make a fuss out of it and will give Ash a chance so I think she will accept her mom's choice. Hope you will update soon because you have lots of stuff going on right now with elevator music dancin legend and that trilogy is still incomplete so i think your are going to take another year for this story to update. All the best with your stories. |
| Anonymous Trainer chapter 8 . 5/27/2018 Nice to see that things are moving along now. Keep up the good work! |
| DarkestLightOfHope chapter 8 . 5/26/2018 I actually forgot what was going on so I had to re-read the previous chapter to understand. But at least you updated... Its kinda depressing and funny how Dawn found out who her mother had picked for her. Well, atleast now she'll know who to look for. XD Hopefully the next update will come sooner XD |
| Apoorvketchum10 chapter 1 . 5/26/2018 ah! wonderful , I can't wait for next update. hope you update soon. |
| SamanthaPearlzz chapter 8 . 5/26/2018 I'm thinking she'll react normally and won't make a big deal out of it. Great job girl and looking forward to more! |
| DawnForever101 chapter 8 . 5/26/2018 Yay an update! I'm glad her mom made it, that was a breath of relief, phew! But I'm thinking that Dawn won't react terribly, maybe she'll be shocked but I don't think she's gonna make a big deal out of it. Idk. XD |
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/29/2017 Please update |
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/6/2017 Good story please continue |
| twilight sparkle chapter 7 . 4/26/2017 Can u please update? Love twilight sparkle |
| Anonymous Trainer chapter 7 . 12/21/2016 Nice chapter, Dawn has changed completely...and also nice joke on the commercial; you know Hindi ? It should be Ab not Aab; also pronunciation is similar to the u in Umbrella. All in all great chapter...but the cliffhanger! |
| Halo Ash chapter 7 . 12/21/2016 Oh Paul, so secretive and broody, reminds me of myself sometimes. And Johanna...that came outta nowhere. |
