I love this format-it makes everything so immediate and so experiential! What a strong choice! I love how Hotch keeps trying to both cooperate with Dave but also analyze the situation-effectively pulling control away from Dave, because Hotch isn't great about letting other people have control. Yet, you never let him get too far away from his own vulnerability and fear, either-Hotch is complex that way, and you weave it all in here. It's beautifully done. Thank you!

So creepy and sad, especially Aaron's confusion about Peter still being alive. Poor Hotch.

It was engrossing read.

Awesome and excellent work!

I like your story because it is different then the other Mr. Scratch stories. Please keep on writing.