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Mana chapter 96 . 8/23 Please, let the plan work. (oh who am I kidding they never go they plan for the heroes, lol). Max mentioning a world of superheroes reminds me, have you heard/seen My Hero Academia? I remember that crossover episode where Jumba mistaken Rufus for one of his experiments, so yeah I would think he is an experiment that he was able to do those things in the show. Ah, nice explanation, with the halfas anyway in terms of loyalty. I thought 'just because they turned it doesn't mean that they agree with their new life so why are the humans...? *reads story explanation* oh ok that makes better sense'. I wasn't meaning having the wildlife to be hunted in the Far Frozen, I just thought having them around sounded cool. But I love your idea of ghosts not needing to eat since they're beings of energy, but in the Infinite Realms episode they had a feast after meeting Frostbite and in Urban Jungle when Frostbite made a side comment while training Danny, 'great, we're not going to sell any snacks now', so yeah I would think that ghosts eat out of pleasure instead of necessity. I also like your idea of ghosts being more instinctually driven, despite if some of them used to be human. Oh yeah, Danny having telekinesis, too bad they didn't show it more. Speaking of ghost lore, what's your theory on ghosts who were human became the very being that their culture believed in? One of them that comes to mind is Desiree, who became the ghostly version of a genie or djinn, something that her people of her time strongly believed in (and still do). Plus she died of a broken heart (most likely stress cardiomyopathy) and old age and still appear young in spirit. I would say it depends on the human's life circumstances, culture, and beliefs. After rewatching it, I agree that Urban Jungle should've been a two part episode. The first part would've been more about trying to defeat Undergrowth but slowly get overwhelmed as he slowly Mind Vines everyone, Sam doing something to make her worthy of Undergrowth's attention other than her love of nature, with the first part ending Danny managing to make it to the Far Frozen. Part two would be Danny getting back up and train with his new ice abilities at a longer time, then confronting Undergrowth like the show. Sounds good to me. I do hope someday that maybe Butch Hartman would do a youtube video with Steve Marmel showing the what ifs/original plans with the episodes and things like that. Til next time. |
Luna Lillyth chapter 96 . 8/22 Oh~ I like how this is being set up. It’s really going to hit Andy when he sees this version of Danny in person. The kid has been doing okay so far, but things are definitely going to go south soon. What I’m expecting anyway. |
Dp-Marvel94 chapter 96 . 8/20 Nice chapter! I liked getting a look at the resistance. They really have the odds stacked against them. But the plan to get Andy and Echo inside using Julliette was a really good idea. I look forward to seeing how this all pans out. |
ChloeTheKitsune chapter 96 . 8/17 ooh I can't wait for the final showdown between brothers. and reading that juilette is corrupted Danny's goat mother was very interesting to say in the least. Also how do people not know who Chad is. you two kinda made it obvious without coming right out and saying it. |
haloguardian452 chapter 96 . 8/17 I'm here to support you however I can! (Actual review) ...rubbing his tummy? This is starting to be a mommy kink chapter more then anything |
The Moonfox Collective chapter 95 . 8/17 Ugh... Echo... oh dear... I think its just my belief that most things can be said if said right. But I feel like it shouldnt be kept from echo that Andy was already a halfa. The important thing would be to preface it that they wanted to help anyway, that they were fully on his side. Course, we all know how Andy felt about this idea at the time, and I suppose Echo might still make an... illogical mind-meltdown inducing chain of overthinking that causes him an anxiety attack buuuuut... yeh. Hes going to find out eventually, I feel. Curious, that Time's Touch (as I am willing to call it) affected this Andy well before he ever had a reason to have it. And that he understands it so well. Clockwork may have been involved somehow regardless of his current inaction... Hmm... no rules, except to not die, basically... not die, and not be trapped indefinitely. And be fast enough to not let Freakshow get away. All while overturning Halfa Planet. XD I guess that's par for the course for andy by now. I know things are tough rn, but hang in there. *is looking directly at the authors* you're strong enough to make it through this and win "this game"... *blinks and turns back to watching Andy* just like him. Show me whatcha got; whenever youre ready! |
sskgmtbooks chapter 93 . 8/2 I'm confused as to who Chad is. An alternate personality ? A figment of imagination ? Wut? |
Mana chapter 95 . 7/31 (Something I forgot to say in my previous review, whoops). I just thought that having other kinds of residents in the Far Frozen would (figuratively) live up the place. Not saying I don't like the Far Frozen, just thought that they could use their ice abilities to create trees, building structures (that make sense to said individuals like Yuki Onna would have a traditional Japanese house or those like Khione would have greek palace), bridges, and I thought they could have, during what is considered night time in the Ghost Zone, their version of the Northern Lights. Not good at describing sceneries. |
Mana chapter 95 . 7/29 My apologies, I was meaning that I agree that I don't like those torture Danny stories either. Phew! At least they got away. Oh boy, they called Clockwork an Ancient, awesome. Uh, I'm with you on this one Andy. I always loved that Clockwork and Danny had a Grandfather/Grandson type relationship but that was kinda weird. But it was nice for Danny and Andy meeting, even if this 'Danny' is from another dimension. Wow! Earth and the Ghost Zone merged without destabilizing?! Now this would be a great plot idea for college years. Stopping Vlad from taking over the Elsewhereness and this would've been a consequence(?). Didn't think far but its awesome. I love Kim Possible! It was one of my favorites growing up. One of the things I noticed as I got older, is that everyone knows that Kim 'saves the world' and her parents and the authorities don't bat an eye about it (which is a breath of fresh air in hero stories), she's not an underdog type hero, and on the cheerleading squad which is something considered only the 'bully/popular' types do in other stories. So yeah, Kim proves that you can be nice, popular, smart, and be a hero while still worry about typical teen stuff like fashion and boys. Ron, he's...oh my gosh! Lol. Whenever I hear 'Wisps', I usually think of the ones from Disney/Pixar movie Brave. Glad you like the idea. I almost added a Ice horses but that would be too similar from the movie. I kinda forgot to add Ice witches, but I guess the Snow Queen from the original fairy tale would count as one? Even forgot the regular ice cream man. Oh well. I just thought the frost fairies flirting with Danny sounded cute. If an idea comes to my head I'll let you know. One of the writers Steve Marmel wanted to make season 3 more darker but they weren't on board with it and then he left (don't know why though). It would've saved season 3 and still be kid friendly. Urban Jungle, in my opinion is one of those potential darker episodes. Eye for an Eye would've been more about revenge on Danny for his clone son instead of getting back at him for pranks. Explore more about the Infi-Map. Maybe explore his pact with the Fright Night. Maybe have Valerie confront Vlad after discovering he's a Halfa *shrug*. Til next time. |
wang.yan.rong2003 chapter 1 . 7/29 I’m sorry, who’s Chad again? I have been following the story since the beginning but I’m still confused |
Luna Lillyth chapter 95 . 7/28 OH. Oh this is going to go downhill for Andy. Emotional torture! YEAH! |
Dp-Marvel94 chapter 95 . 7/28 Danny and Clockwork cuddling is adorable. I just love Clockwork being Danny's dad... or grandpa in this case. And I loved seeing that timeline's Danny and Andy meeting. I hope Andy gets to come back under better circumstances. And the reality where Andy wasn't able to stop Corrupted Danny is really interesting. Andy meeting another version of himself is super cool. I wonder how Echo would react to finding out Andy is a halfa. |
Jewel moonstone chapter 95 . 7/27 well, this will be intresting... also, my brother got a kitten for his birthday, we're working on introduceing her to our three pets. |
andrealimon2380 chapter 95 . 7/27 Ahhhhh Echo. I wonder if that's a small reference to another one of your stories. *glances at The Infinite Realms* |
ChloeTheKitsune chapter 95 . 7/27 damn awesome chapter but also long one |