Reviews for The White Room Child
neeniya chapter 11 . 4/7
Holy shit
My heart is racing and I'm at the edge of my seat here! That was one heck of a ride!

This is definitely not a story to read at 2 am cuz now what am I supposed to do? I'm gonna be thinking about this all night! I can't go to bed now!

I have so many questions! Like what happened to Reed? Well obviously he died, but did his ghost form? If I'm remembering correctly Danny's ghost sense went off after he died right? Is he still around in the facility or did he go straight to the ghost zone? Part of me is dreading that he was the ghost Danny passed in the hall

And then theres what's going to happen to Faust! This man definitely will have a vendetta whether he lives or dies (I'd be mad impressed if he lived, but hes probably already long on his way to the afterlife). So then the question is, what will his ghost's obsession be? Despite being obsessed with creating a ghost human hybrid later in his life, Walker's obsession ended up being based in what he obsessed with for the majority of his life. So I'm guessing while Faust definitely has some hard core hatred for Vlad, his obsession probably won't manifest as wanting to kill Vlad. It'll definitely be something destructive tho.

And theeennn theres Jack and Maddie. These two dreadful, horrible people. Bumping into Jack is probably going to come and bite Vlad in the butt for sure. Now I imagine that Jack will be pestering him to come join them for dinner which could eventually lead to Vlad discovering exactly whose child Danny is. Which will be a great discovery for Vlad I'm sure. (Not only is his hatred for Jack now doubly valid, but his delusion for Maddie will be shattered as well and he'll realize she's just as bad) (maybe then Vlad might feel more compelled to do something drastic to them). But then this leaves Jazz, who probably grew up thinking she'd sent her little brother away to some secret government agency to die. I wonder what she's doing in all this? She was probably like 7 when this all went down, so she'll only be 12 now, would she have forgotten about her brother? Accepted he had died? Or is she secretly holding on to the hope that he is still alive? Have her parents convinced her Danny is an evil ghost inhabiting the corpse of her brother?

And of course, questions for the future for Vlad and Danny. Gosh this kid has been put through so much. I'm so glad he's finally out and free. While he's not out of the woods quite yet, what with the amount of healing and recovery he's going to need, he's on a good path now. Plus we're finally getting into that good found family business. Better get those adoption papers Vladdy!

Anyways, absolutely amazing fix! Eagerly awaiting what you have planned for our halfas!
Redfoxshadow chapter 11 . 11/1/2019
Wow, this is such a different story than I've read before. It's great! I hope you update it soon.
Great work!
DJmiso chapter 11 . 7/4/2019
and here we are. the last of the updates. omg, you have to come back and write more! this story got to the good part and this is where it ends!? you can’t just leave us hanging like that. i like that vlad didn’t feel immediate sympathy when he saw danny. stuck true to his personality and but he seemed to fer a little guilty. i mean, who can resist such a face like danny’s!? and where’s faust? did they find him or is he dead? i hope he’s dead. in any case, i hope you come back to update one day. you’re too good at building suspense only to let that hanging on a cliff. let your life be a good one and full of great health!
DJmiso chapter 10 . 7/4/2019
i wish vlad had made faust had died. he would so deserve it. he also wouldn’t become an obstacle later, but what a story be with its main villain being dead already. *sigh* at least he found danny. but you just had to end it there. there’s one more chapter to read, i just HOPE it doesn’t end on anothet cliffhanger. i swear this story will be the death of me, lol.
DJmiso chapter 5 . 7/4/2019
oshit. shit bout to go down. and here i thought vlad managed to get away completely. darn. and i literally cussed when vlad just passed over ‘white room.’ what wiill faust do now?

also, i’ve been listening to digital daggers as i read this. particularly, just beneath the flames, bleed for me, and angel. they match really well with some of the scenes in the story. 8D
DJmiso chapter 4 . 7/4/2019
actually, cutting the chapters in half built the suspense a bit. we all know he’s gonna find danny and i can’t wait for him to get outta there. so like, i’m kinda bouncing for him to hurry up, lmao.
DJmiso chapter 3 . 7/4/2019
i just want danny and vlad to meet already! poor danny’s suffering too much. qq why do i read these stories if i don’t want him to suffer? oright... i can’t help it...
Guest chapter 11 . 6/15/2019
Please update!
Guest chapter 11 . 5/28/2019
Amazing please finish I'm dying to read more
DarkSakura159 chapter 11 . 3/17/2019
I LOVE IT! Just a quick question, are you still working on this fic? I really hope that you do because the suspense is killing me! Thank you so much for writing this and I hope you have a good life XD
Guest chapter 11 . 2/28/2019
First 2019 comment! People still read your story! It’s so hard to find good writers in this niche, and you’re very talented. I honestly hope you continue this story. I left late for work this morning because I got sucked in, and I couldn’t stop thinking about the story all day. Hoping you see this review and seriously consider continuing the story for the readers you’ve turned into addicts.
Devi kchingli chapter 11 . 10/30/2018
Great fanfiction! I hope this continue soon! I cant wait!
GhostlyPhantom chapter 11 . 10/19/2018
plz update
Abby chapter 11 . 7/17/2018
more please this is awesome
Wings-Of-The-Owl chapter 11 . 7/17/2018
Holy shit, I love this. The way you write Vlad is so on point, I love how sly and snarky he is! And Faust is a really good villain! AAAAAAAA I'm so relieved Vlad finally found Danny! I don't know if you still plan on continuing, but if you are, I'm following!
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