You did a remarkable job writing from the perspective of an elderly individual. Ive never read a fanfic told from the pov of an elderly character and I think you did an excellent job.
This was poignant and sad. Great job

Oh, my God. This was so beautiful. Mimi was not cold hearted or cruel; you depicted her a free, independent person. There is a huge difference. I loved this story so much, so much! There was a solemn and melancholic touch to it and I was hooked from the very beginning. Perfect characterization, fantastic flow and vocabulary, great plot. I loved everything and anything about her and spring, and Taichi, and their son, and Sora and everything! I'm so giddy, I loved it so much. Please keep writing Mimato! You did it so well. Drawing from personal experience is fine; hospice care can be so sad, right? I don't think I had ever read anything where they were so old and I never knew I needed it until now.

This is so sad. :(

That was quite nice to read and an interesting character study. I don't ever think about characters aging to that point because I guess it's something uncomfortable for me but I do think you kept Yamato in character. His life had it's tragedies (Taichii! Nooo!) But I think it does reflect life and how it's not always rainbows and butterflies. I would love to read other versions of this story! Especially Jyou because that boy is hilarious and I love him haha. Thank you for the good but melancholy read!

Aww... that was sweet and melancholy. Its a different way to look at the characters. Rarely do you see yhem portrayed as elderly seniors. Still wish there was more Tai though/pouts/.

So sad! A lot of sad mimato stories lately. Very interesting look into your line of work too.