OH man I love this! Your descriptions and action sequences were exciting and detailed. I'm envious of people who take the time to write these parts out and really do it well. I think you nailed every aspect of each character. Very enjoyable and very easily fits into the show. You are a great writer my friend!

Awwww! Kanan's such a worry wart! It's adorable! This was a wonderful and in-depth look into Kanan's character. Well done!

Thank you for writing!

Yay fatherly Kanan! :)

That was awesome! I especially loved the line "He wasn't sure which question was going to make it out of his mouth first: where are you, who's shooting at you, or why the hell are you telling people you are doing Jedi training?" I loved that line; that's exactly what I assume Kanan would be thinking at that point.
You did a great job!

Two-shot? But I want more... Please at least do Empire Day! please!

XD Cute. And it ties in very well! Thanks for sharing. :)

awwwwwwww perfect ending!

Love it!

Can u do a chapter on Ezra and jai on the ghost

This was amazing! Keep up the good work!

May the Force be with you!

This was wonderful! A prefect breakdown of Kanan's thoughts! I'll be looking forward to more.

This was a great read! It definitely felt like this was missing from the show, right?
I really enjoyed how you wrote Kanan's POV, I will happily accept this as headcannon.
Hope to see more of your rebels work.

Next chapter now

Love this. Awesome writing! Can't wait for the next part.

Poor Kanan! Please update soon!

May the Force be with you!