Dumbledore is terrifying.

This was a fun and interesting read. I did really enjoy the ways you integrated Jareth and kept true to character as the Goblin King. This interactions with Prince Jared and the headmaster were also clear, consistent, and most amusing. I hope to see more of this one day, but thank you for all the work you put into this so far. Hope the new family is still going well.

Plz plz plz update soon

Just found your story this morning, and I'm really enjoying it! I hope you do update it further, I'm quite hooked on your characters and story line. Thank you for sharing your hard work!

Oh, dumbledore... So foolish...

Even IF he could have changed the laws (or use them) forbid goblins from being guardians to humans, his father is Fae, and even if he forbid THAT, his mother is stil human. Nevermind the fact that wizards are NOT willing to risk another goblin rebellion JUST because of the whims of a fading star.

(I mean... Fudge hates and fear him and would do anything to stop his plans. Rita Skeeter ridicules him every chance she gets. dumbles is NOT as popular once you get outside the walls of Hogwarts.)

I am looking forward to see how this turns out.

Please tell me there will be more of this incredible story. I really enjoyed all the chapters I've read and can't wait for more.

Can't wait for the next update! I am really enjoying this.

Dumbledore is basically a closet Dark Wizard. Amazing story!

I have enjoyed the story very much and thank you for your work.
Even though all characters are "of" the originals, it works great and you have made them feel real and more than close enough to JK's that it works very well.

I look forward to the next chapters and, again, what to thank you for your very good work.

Hi,

I hope that you find yourself with the time, inclination and inspiration to continue with this tale. It was fun to read.

cheers

Hi,

Regarding your DD, I am assuming (but I don't believe that it was stated) that your Harry still has a sliver of Riddle within him. It wasn't clear chapters back, when the goblins first examined little Harry if they had found Lily's protection or the sliver.

As such, your DD's motives for all of his manipulation (other than being an arse) aren't really clear.

cheers

Hi,

I've enjoyed that chapters that I've read so far, Thanks for sharing them.

I've enjoyed reflecting on the scenes that you chose to include and exclude from your tale.

cheers

Old-Crow

Wonderful story, I can not wait for the next chapter:)

I am looking forward to Dumbledore getting a very bad day soon! I look forward to when your little one allows you to write more!

I am so glad I found this magnificent story ! I am looking forward to seeing what comes next !