Really fucking RETARDED go die in a hole and take this pece of shit with you

If I had a bit more info for the story, like where it was going, and the plot, I'd would like to adopt then.

update soon please

update soon

please update soon

Good start!
I hope you write more, this xould really turn into something!
May I suggest a beta though? You writings not bad, but there are some things that could be changed. Its mostly how you structered you sentence.
"When someone speaks, it is seperated from dialogue, with the exception of what the characters action is," she said, waving her hands.
Thats basically it, if you want a better idea, look at a book. Beat way, next to being taught it.

I'm looking forwards to seeing what happens to Ichigo and everyone he left behind.

The 46 are idiots.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! I have tears in my eyes from laughing too hard! X'D Central forty-six make a HUGE mistake! ;)

needs longer chapters and faster updates but other than that great start

So far this is a pretty interesting story but man you gotta add some bulk to the chapters, 737 words for 2 chapters isn't really that much.

at this rate the 1st 10ch's could be combined into 1, why so short?

there were a few spelling errors

Update soon...

an interesting concept, if you turn this into a story i really hope ch's will not be this short

I like this, you should really continue writing this!

Oh please, PLEASE continue this! This sounds like it's going to be a blast! XD