Reviews for Seeking Greatness
BooYa7 chapter 22 . 6/11
Roses are red, violets are blue.
Reviews aren't something I usually do,
But the 51 chapters I just blazed through -
Stuff like Cepheus' death hit my heart too true.
Hence, another chapter please, I hope you'd continuously issue.
For the amazing fanfic, I'd like to really thank you.
NicCraft18 chapter 51 . 5/25
I’m not dead, I swear, just busy. How you doing with quarantine? Mine is finally coming to an end and I’ve been busy doing all the stuff I haven’t wanted to do. Uggghhhh!

Loved getting to read this! I’ve been trying to fix my sleep schedule, but stayed up late just to read this, burning eyes and all hahaha

To answer your question, I really, truly thought you were going to kill off Sirius. Just like the books. I prepared myself for it. I was ready. So that shocked the absolute hell out of me!

Poor Ankaa. I find her anger to be justified. I also like the new dynamic. Ankaa was more depressed rather than angry with Ceph’s death. And she was better able to process it with her mother as a moral compass and guide. Without her mother there to urge for forgiveness, Ankaa won’t easily give it.

And oh my gosh! Can Ankaa and Sirius ever get along? Hahaha I sometimes forget how young Ankaa is, but things like inviting her friend over without permission and the silent treatment, really show she’s just a hurt kid missing her mom.

It’s a good thing she still has Sirius, I just hope they can learn to get along. I also hope she takes his advice into account about Fred. Ankara’s greatest struggles are her pride and her anger, so we’ll see.

Although, I enjoyed seeing some growth from her when I comes to Draco. What’s going to happen with him? We all know Draco is neutral, not good, but wishing he could be. Will having a childhood friend on the other side sway him? I’m curious!

But either way, this was brilliantly written. You had your characters grapple with their emotions in a very realistic way. We don’t always cry it out and feel better. And we don’t always just express sadness. It comes through as anger or apathy. I loved, absolutely loved, the realism and relatability and emotion in this chapter. Keep it up!

Can’t wait to hear more from you. And keep staying safe out there! Happy Memorial Day (for all my fellow Americans) and Happy Monday (for everyone else)! LOL
PoodlesRock chapter 51 . 5/3
this is hands down one of my favourite stories on here youve done so well. you tie the elements together so perfectly and no scene is ever wasted theres always some kind of relationship being built or some story being driven forward i love it so much i really hope you update soon - WERE IN THE ENDGAME NOW
LiaLoveFood chapter 51 . 4/8
Oh wow what a great chapter! I'm so glad to see you update your story. Looking forward to the next chapter so much:):):)
Guest chapter 51 . 4/7
Omg I looove the story so far! You’re such a good writer! I gotta admit when Ceph died you had me crying my eyes out before bed in the dark. I think my dog was kinda confused I get that Ankaa’s stubborn (I can relate I’ve held a grudge against someone for 4 years) but pleaseee let her and Fred reconcile I love their relationship (the good parts hehe). Also please don’t let Henry die cause of Alice he’s a good character. I don’t really see Sirius as her dad to be honest, Henry all the way! Can't wait to read the rest of the story!
Raven that flies at night chapter 51 . 4/5
Ooo dang well this is about to get wild. Poor Sirius its sad he never had the chance do be a true father to Ankaa when she was little. I feel like he how to help a little better if he had cotton to know her more. Also I do hope that Sirius ends up just letting Fred walk into Ankka's room and they work it out. I hope she can someday get back together with Fred. Both Sirius and Ankaa deserve to be happy and I hope they can both have it. Also I really missed this story and I am super glad that it go updated.
Raven that flies at night chapter 50 . 4/4
I'm really honestly kind of torn I absolutely loved Maya and I'm really sad she's gone but the same time we still have Sirius so I'm a little torn on how I feel
BudddyBuddyy chapter 51 . 4/2
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE IVE BEEN LOOKING FORWARD TO IT I loved this chapter as usual. Im surprised Sirius wasnt lookng out for his daughter but I think thats just his character too kind of like when he went all in for getting revenge for JAmes and Lily I think it shows how passionate he is. I think you translated that really well.
Looking forward to the next one!
monkeybaby chapter 51 . 4/2
Nice chapter!
19irene96 chapter 51 . 4/1
OMG. HONESTLY #TeamAnkaa foreveeer. And also #TeamDraco. Love Zara too. Harry is super annoying cant wait for the ignoring of the century. He does not deserve it. And honestly, i feel Sirius should care more about his daughter!?
x3sYellowie chapter 50 . 2/15
I've been obsessing over this story ever since I chanced upon it a few days ago. Thanks so much for breathing life into this masterpiece.

One thing that I would love to see more of - Harry's crush on Ankaa, that was way too brief and it was so cute!

Can't wait for the future updates, keep up the good work!
taylor115 chapter 1 . 2/2
The lack of Cephus in the prologue scares me. I really hope he's not dead or fighting for Voldemort. She also doesn't mention her parents so they could be dead as well.

I'm not prepared for angst yet.

Taylor x x
askousen44 chapter 50 . 1/3
wow this is one of the best stories I have ever read! You have it planned out so well and everything flows so smoothly. I love how your oc charactors are not all invisible and are realistic, it is really relatable. Thanks for doing an awesome job. I look forward to more chapters.
Marnie Quiera chapter 50 . 12/20/2019
I feel as though this will place a rift in Ankaa and Fred’s relationship, he had NO right to do that! Seething right now! And she will be so angry at Harry for so long! Will Sirius be exonerated?
Guest chapter 50 . 12/6/2019
Thank you so much for updating! I truly enjoy this story and can’t wait to see where Ankaa and Fred end up. (Hopefully married)
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