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Fist mistake already made xD

I'm sorry to have to break this to you Jess, but you just allowed vampires to cross your dorstep, so don't expect to live much longer

So, are you thinking of continuing this or is it just another dead story? I hope you decide to keep going since you have a grasp of the English language that so many people here seem to lack, which is exactly what makes those stories unreadable to me. It would be a shame if this didn't carry on.

Noooooooo! The bastard's still alive! Argh! So terrible! I LOVE it! Your fiction is very creative and I'm already shipping Jacob and Nibi. Please continue!

Thanks for the update. I hope things go well for you (in becoming a writer) and that you do well in college. As for the direction the story goes, I'm very interested to see where you take it as well. You definitely have things set up interestingly with the guy with the blue and spiky hair (can't remember his name) showing up and possible being against the kirishiki's. And I look forward to see where you go with that. This last bit is kind of selfish but do you think you could somehow bring in Ritsuko? I think she'd be a great addition to the story, perhaps she could be a nurse again at the doctors clinic, and have come here trying to help protect people?...well I guess that's all. Thanks for still considering working on this fanfic, I think it like many of the others (that are no longer being continued as far as I can tell) have great potential to be good stories, and I look forward to reading your chapters as they come out.

I'm glad that someone is writing Shiki fanfics again, there are quite a few good ones that have gone unfinished. I look forward to seeing why Tatsumi wants to help Eva and the town with other shiki (assuming he means kill them of course).

Plus , Is it a Yaoi ship ?
Please Don't let it be .. Natsuno and Kaori forever TT

Bring Natsuno back and let him be with Kaori tanaka ..
Good one , I love Shiki and I am writing a fanfic of it too XD

Truly very good. I like the story quite a lot with New characters and some of the old as well. I don't suppose Nibiki is based off of you is she? Anyways please continue this wonderful story that you've created.

Please write more chapters , I am really liking the flow of this story and if you don't that's cool seem very interesting and relatable.

I finally saw that was updated. I read all of them back to back, including the first four again. Great story, and I agree that longer chapters would be nice. I'm still addicted to Shiki after all this time and these stories are the only thing that helps.

Sunako better keep watch over her underlings, or else another Chizuru might occur. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapters.

very nice! i totally forgot this story existed for a while...though i still wish megumi was in it..but i like your writing style and your updates are always a nice read, keep up the good work...and perhaps post longer chapters, this wasn't enough to sate my hunger...i must recede into the shadows to stalk my next prey...errr, find another story to read in the meantime before you update again

will you please put megumi in it? PLEASE! she is my favorite

Thanks for the updates. I'm really liking where this is going. Will the mentioned characters like Toshio make a return?

If so, throw Tatsumi a bone (wink wink).

This was a great start. I'm curious to know who the rest of the shiki are.

Looking forward to Ch2!