| Reviews for The World Without Bay Kennish |
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BobWhite chapter 5 . 9/19/2018 please continue with this story. I want w know what happens when she gets back to her actual life |
BobWhite chapter 5 . 4/27/2016 Please go in, can't wait to read more |
legend fanatic chapter 5 . 11/30/2015 you should totally do this thing were she sees everyone the Gabriel shows her what happened to emmet. then he shows her what emmet did after they broke up and he was a complete mess. she ends up getting hit by a car on her way to talk to him and she gets putt in the icu (everything back to normal) and he's there with her and no one knows if she will be ok. just an idea and I've thought about writing something like this. |
TheHungerGames321 chapter 5 . 11/23/2015 I love this story! 3 3 3 |
Joan Powers chapter 5 . 10/7/2015 This is always a fun idea and you're doing a great job with the characters. Joan |
Guest chapter 5 . 8/29/2015 Update! |
BekaRoo chapter 5 . 6/5/2015 Way what a chapter. Please update again soon! |
DanyDreamz chapter 5 . 6/5/2015 Really enjoying this story, please update again soon! |
Stardust1111 chapter 5 . 6/4/2015 Hey love the update! |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/29/2015 Please post again ! |
freeyoursoulx chapter 4 . 5/9/2015 This is so incredibly well written and I am so happy I stumbled upon it. I've always favored Bay on the show and to see something so unexpected but so...I don't really know, so bay I guess - it's just refreshing. A lot of the stories I have found on here center around Daphne or Emmett and Bay getting pregnant and it's all so predictable and boring. So thank you, for writing this. You have such an immense talent and I am so excited to see what happens next. :) -Chelsey. |
secondstar1111 chapter 4 . 5/8/2015 Love this so much |
Abby Elyse Samuel chapter 4 . 5/8/2015 I get the feeling we will see Angelo again. Although tragic, I love that you chose for Angelo and Regina to lose the baby girl, rather than for one to never have existed at all. This world is one where Bay was never born, but she did exist. I can't wait to meet Regina, too. I love this story and look forward to every update. |
Abby Elyse Samuel chapter 3 . 5/8/2015 John always said Bay makes him see the world differently. I guess she really does. Good chapter! I believe John is one of the people who would most feel Bay's absence, after Emmett. Daphne is too much like John to show him a different way of being. Kathryn is a lot like Bay. I wonder how Kathryn's life will be affected in a world without Bay. |
Abby Elyse Samuel chapter 2 . 5/8/2015 I like that Bay believes it is Emmett, at first. He is on her mind, and that makes sense considering what happened between them just a few hours earlier. I look forward to finding out why Daphne wasn't looking out for Toby. I have some ideas as to why, and I want to see it unfold. |