broooooooo yes wow i loved this sooooo much ! i want more ):
there was literally NO closure and sorry but shay and vella would've been the cutest fucking thing

Wow this is so awesome! Amazing job with the characters!

That was so good!

Great Story! It was really emotional. I just absolutely love this game and I can't stop playing it. I especially love the part when Vella brough up the snake that strangles you and both Vella and Shay said "blow the horn" at the same time! Excellent story!

yessss but what happened to the actual snake? it still gives hugs, but it also now knows when to give up.

oh God I am so emotionally invested in this and there's nothing I can do about it. aggghhh. your story was LOVELY.

continue plz

I too wish there was more resolution to the ending other than a few pictures in the credits, but your story here reads as a perfect epilogue to the game. Your characterization is spot on, and the dialogue makes me happy. I liked the way you described the cake, and how annoyed Vella was that Shay seemed to like his mother's present better, cause to her that translated as his lingering attachment to his former life. Very well-written.

Loved the game.
Loved this.
This game is pure FanFiction-fuel.
I need an Act 3. I fell in love with Vella and Shay.
Great work! Very well-written.

OMG that was so good! May I ask that you write more BA fanfics, pls!

Cute. I agree there wasn't enough at the end.

The ending was just perfect! I really loved this :) well done!

I love this! I've been looking for an epilogue to Act 2 and this was perfect! Also, you're really good at writing about thoughts and emotions. I'm terrible at writing about emotions.

They just stared at each other in the end! I need closure! I ship Shay/Vella, they're so cute. This was awesome!

Yes! Just what the ending should have been.