Please update your story soon!

Out of the few dark/evil Harry Potter Stories ive managed to read so far, id say this one is definitely my 2nd favorite so far only being passed by Harry Potter: Lord of Darkness. Thats not to be a dig at your story but rather the fact that this story is already my 2nd favorite Harry Potter story and im willing to bet its not really close to being done, is an achievement at least to me. I hope your able to return to this story some time soon since this is a fantastic story and more than deserves to be finished.

Cant wait to see whatever other references you will be adding to the story.

Hey please update this story! Don't Abandon it!

While I love this story I will admit I don’t like Harry having sex with the Abyss girls. I liked how in the original that Melody was his only source of pleasure and that caused her to be corrupted faster to his side. It also was a good use for Luna to join in when his only source of pleasure was petrified. And I feel with having a whole slew of woman and girls to choose from sort of reduces Melody’s significance from the story as being one of his first and most loyal follower/slut.
Also I feel the Abyss has played it’s use because at this point the Abyss is not interesting I do think Bowser, Blink, and Charlotte should play a more roles to help him. When I first read the Abyss idea I thought Harry would be something like Kingpin from Marvel. I don’t know but what I do know is Abyss is stale and you need something new.

Is the darkness in the ice the Horcrux?

The End of this chapter is a little messed up because you changed the year from 2012 back to 1992. It also looks like you copied and pasted a bit and the previous stories first year ending so you might want to go back and edit this a little.

this chapter could have been handled better. why make him wear a hood if everyone recognizes him, or you tell them it's harry potter when asked

I am just beginning the story, but I like your introductory chapter. thanks for the rewrite!

God...at this point, I just want something resembling an action or someone actually doing something.
There's just SO MUCH exposition.
Please tell me this gets better.

So, six chapters in and I'm pretty bored. These "Mystics" are the most bland plot device I've read about and Charlotte is just... Phew.
I've seen this story more than twenty times and I've never managed to go past chapter 2. I skipped a lot of bland exposition and I figured I'd just read to the end with this skipping and see if the story gets any better.

Fairy tail and RWBY referemce

Please come and continue to write this please

to get lucy back harry should have to do something like burning a city full of people to the ground that way he also becomes darker and more evil.

plastic wrap or magic equivalent sealed over bathroom door laxtives or just put the wrap over bowl make it impervious and add laxatives could see it happening to malfoy

Yeah this story tries to encompass way past what it should. Lots and lots of telling. Very little showing. No longer follows harry and his understanding, instead this weird outline bullet point checklist of drabble.

Remember what growing up was like. Remember that third - person. But with first person potency. You have made this bland... I want harry centric . And u writing harry centric. But...this is dead...And all I can. Do 's re read all the versions u have available...a d one day...May be I will get to re read once again the original lp