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   lulu2613 chapter 7 . 6/20/2016 I absolutely broke on this |
| lulu2613 chapter 2 . 6/20/2016 They almost had sex after one encounter i guess when you feel that spark its inevitable |
| lulu2613 chapter 1 . 6/20/2016 You wrote the same paragraph twice. But other than that this is a really good start. |
| XLil MEkoX chapter 1 . 5/8/2015 AH you have no idea how long I was waiting for a fic like this! (I'll probably catch up before you know it lol) Oddly enough, I found myself liking Wesley, I knew I couldn't be the only one! I hope we get to know the woman to catch his eyes in the next chapter (heterochromia is so awesome by the way lol) Looking forward to more chapters! Happy writing and much love! |
| strange-sort-of-company chapter 9 . 5/6/2015 Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh...I'm kinda really happy you did an alternate ending!? Oh my gosh, I am soooo looking forward to the next chaper. 0_0 so good. Haha, I alighted at Wesley not liking to be called buddy...I can see that for him. You right these characters, yours and the others so well, I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! |
| strange-sort-of-company chapter 7 . 5/6/2015 Oh...this was such a good chapter...oh man. Esme's point of view was really nice, and I think I actually teared up a bit. Oh, what was the violin piece that was used? |
| strange-sort-of-company chapter 5 . 5/6/2015 Oh, like that you added a bit with Fisk. (I really appreciate ((appreciated? :( )) the relationship between Wesley and him) I hope to see more of him. *jitteryly continues reading* |
| strange-sort-of-company chapter 4 . 5/6/2015 I really liked this chapter. Upping the complexity of their relation ship; nice! And Esme is sweet to Wesley's almost bitter(?) again, your skills of internal dialogue are a'okay to say the least. _ |
| strange-sort-of-company chapter 1 . 5/6/2015 Love they way you start this story, and even more, you write Wesley with a very feasible and appealing voice. He really grew on me, and I think your story is going to do nothing but encourage that, haha. |
| luchi chapter 1 . 4/30/2015 Omg i love it! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/30/2015 It's nice when OC stories turn out this well, hope this pace in updates keeps up. |
| luchi chapter 6 . 4/29/2015 Omg I love this! I really love Wesley! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/29/2015 Very nice. |
| darklou chapter 6 . 4/29/2015 Really interesting story and take on what a relationship with Wesley could be ! |
| acosytoken chapter 2 . 4/28/2015 Oh my, what a chapter! ;) you seriously have a way with words! |
