AAAAHHHH! I'm not the only one who wants Rose to be a regeneration of River! :D

Wait wait wait- so, Rose came to the Prime universe, then, because she was Bad Wolf, she regenerated and became River Song? I'm so confused. But I love this fic anyways!

Very much enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.

What?
First thing first..so far this hasn't seemed much like a story. It felt like it was summarized mostly. It was getting hard to stay in the story by the third chapter because there wasn't any scenes really, just summary. You were just telling readers what happened, not really showing it. It lacked emotion and drama. The pacing was fast and to the point. Things happened to quickly.
Secondly, Rose is River Song? Who is her parents then? The Ponds or the Tylers? How does she know she's River Song? This is the moment when Rose returned to this universe, which means she hasn't lived being River Song yet. How do you explain River Song's death then?
I can't go on without sounding even more rude. I was just confused and frustrated with this. I had loads of issues with it. If I could stomach it, I might be less confused if I just finish reading this, but I can't. But, hey, there are people out there who did like it and that is all that matters.

This is just brilliant

"They heard someone sigh with pleasur"? That's a bit unsettling. Yay!the bond, it's so romantic! Thanks

Three things:

•I loved the 'Love Don't Roam' reference in the previous chapter. I love that song and was just listening to it earlier
•Of the classic companions, you kinda skipped Zoe, Ben, Leela, and Dodo. And you could've added Charley and Lucie and some other Eighth Doctor audio companions but you did say 'and many more' so... But I did think you'd want to know.
•Jane... Her name is Jenny, actually. I think naming her Jenny was silly ad there were already two Jenny's in series three and four, and several Lucy's. But I'd go in and change that if I were you.

It's a bit strange that Rose isn't with him, she should be. Thanks

Well, you said most if not all things would become clear soon and you definitely explained a lot of things in this update...I felt pity than a bit of anger towards the Doctor for again leaving Rose behind...sometimes I wonder if he even deserves another chance...thanks for the update.

That was unexpected! Rose is River, who would've thought? How come he just left her there?
Thanks x

Poor Doctor, it must be devastating. Rose's pet name "love" from 12 made me smile :) thank you x

Keep writing. I love this story.

Aw, that's sweet and sad

bitter-sweet with River but since Rose had encouraged that relationship she must have a good reason and I am patient enough to wait until all is revealed.

I am still curious but a bit confused...who is Rose with and why is she trying to push the Doctor and River together...will continue with the hope of finding out those answers.