Finally got around to playing Borderlands 2 and got far enough to be comfortable reading this series. I'm definitely having fun so far (no surprise)!

When listing names for the Sci-Zone, I was somewhat surprised that "Science-Related Memetic Disorder" didn't make the list. Then again, the symptoms are different enough that it wouldn't fit as well as the others.

Regarding self-inserts and author-surrogates, I agree that they're only USUALLY bad. Third Fang's character Ghost is one of the more noteworthy exceptions, though I'm also fond of the SI story "Accio Butterflies" by tearlessNevermore. Heck, thinking about author surrogates made me realize that my own long-running story "Umino Iruka and the Will of Fire" tends to use Iruka as such (not that I'd put it on the quality level of any of the above, just that it'd be hypocritical of me to condemn the practice).

Okay got to admit that was pretty good wish you had of continue that though

Jeez, talk about a sudden punch in the nuts. I thought this was going to be a happy ending. At least Angel didn't die.. yet? OHSHITPLEASEDONTDOTHAT!

They got the girl! An angel trapped in satan's dungeon has been freed! Dude, I've gotta congratulate you for actually making me cry while reading. It takes a lot to get me to cry (aside from pain, but the tears would be from anger, where the tears I shed while I read this were from joy.) You're a great author, and as soon as I make an account here, I'm definitely adding you as a favorite author.

Hello. My name is Tiny Tina. You killed my parents, prepare to die. FUCKING PRINCESS BRIDE!? You're amazing, dude. Seriously. It is inconceivable how amazing you are! And, yes, that word does not mean what i think it means.

These annotations, dude. you're either a nerd, or a scientific badass. i'll go with the latter.

"The weak are grilled meat for the strong."-Saber, as one of the announcers for the nature documentary segment of Carnival Phantasm which presented us with Saber Lion (and fed Lancer to her)

I like both types of cookies, but I certainly never confuse the two...

Re: Last chapter, the UNSC Shield Generator does work about as you said. It also makes it into an envelope so the shield is thin and even more powerful while it lasts. You might want to watch the anime _HALO Legends_ as the Generator is used in two formats in the segments. In _Prototype_ one is installed as the shield for the eponymous power armor testbed. It's a potent defense, but when it fails, it doesn't regenerate like the regular shield systems of MJOLNIR armor systems.

_Odd One Out_ has the most game-true model in use, a rugby ball form that generates the forcefield sphere around itself until it burns out a brief time later.

For those that wonder about Misotheist, a few definitions.

Misogynist: C'mon, you all know this one. One that hates and fears women.
Misandrist: Welcome to the flip side, these people hate and fear men.
Misanthrope: The same paradigm applies but the misanthrope is hostile to all humans.
Misotheist: One who hates organized religion. The root being shared with that of Theology is the kicker.
Those with a problem with God would be Misdeists, I suppose.

I love your story it was amazing I love the technical terms and how well you went into detail with all the science and medical research and I love his Jekyll and Hyde ability
I'm also a huge sucker for romance I'm about to read your next story and I can't wait to see what happens next

Keep up the amazing work Love :)

Good length, good alance good fun. Great completed story overhaul.
The kinf of story that make this site what it is.

You know, this story have a good length. Normally, those kind of stories have hundred of chapters or so. Like Jack's Dick.

That moment with Jack made me sad ans laugh at the same time.

More like best chapter ever.

If I could put a Not bad obama meme, I would do it right here, right now.
Geez, my cynical part is fully appeased. No offence, btw, it was just that sometime, self insert doesn't mix well with everything.
And sometime it does, and it's pretty.