damned good one shot of a story sent chills up my spine and finer words never been spoken. remember us. they didnt want songs or poetry or statues just a simple an order as a king could give... remember us. tell a spartan passers by that here by spartan law we lie.

Damn this was deep

Bro, this is why you must respect the Hufflepuffs. *dries my eyes* Damn, this was short but sweet.

Well this was a pretty good story, just seems a bit rushed. All these people talking about how they started crying and such, but it's really not that sad. However, I have been said to be anwhen it comes to sadness and such... so it might just be me. Nice 300 reference by the way.

Damnn crying a river here becusa is this loved it

Holy Cow. Damn great and awesome story. This is a tear jerker too. And I love it. Awesome work.

oh my god...I'm sitting here sniffling and wiping my eyes quickly so that my husband (who doesn't understand my love of fanfiction) doesn't see my cry again. LOL Excellent story. I'll be adding it to my own C2 so that I can read it again and again.
Thank you so much for sharing this.
~Alexis

Whoa... Damn, got a tear out of me with that poem. I know it would be a step down, but, would you consider a further chapter with a roundup of events? Sirius free, Dumbledore's inditement, Fudge's impeachment, you know, the stuff JKR didn't have the stones to right as the flagrant royalist liberal she is? Just a thought...

I like how you referenced 300 in this story! Do you think there's any chance you could create a full-on crossover between Harry Potter and the 300 franchise?

Great story. A little to poetic for my tastes for some of the language choices, but that can be blamed on style, and further allusion to spartans. Otherwise, Good Show Old Chap

i am crying like crazy right and you're not to blame

Now, that's a potent and poignant story. Methinks Tom never expected that ending; Harry certainly took his mother's advice to heart and it paid off, though the cost to him was high.

Eh, to. It was...meh. Rushed and disjointed somewhat.

This was... AMAZING, so incredible, I love it! a true and amazing family feeling and the mark of a real spartan!

Beautiful!