I CALL JUNE 29 COMMENT

Are you kidding me. You left on a cliffhanger.

And next thing you know, you have pre-dreadnoughts, ships from the age of sail, and ironclads.

BB-61, USS Iowa.

You should make the battle scenes more realistic because in real life it's pretty hard to hit something with a torpedo and the abyssals should be stronger. That was a mouthful.

Only a few hits? I don't think it would just take 1-3 hits from 5' shells to take out a dd.

so... the Acronym for the ship girls is FAP? ... huh, didn't think it was gonna be THAT type of story but here we go I guess.

To bad ypu ended this story. It seemed to really be picking up speed and was really good to. Smith was cool to say the least at the commander and midway was different for a base of ops for the program. This idea you did was very cool to read. Intro of walker and her sister f rt on Taylors work was very cool. Enterparze was very cool though. Langley being out dated as a carrier, why would she be. Since the gear has to be made for the girls, updatING them would be easy. Unlike other stories that the girls come back with their geAR and can sommoned their rigging at will.

Pls update. The audience is growing and a story like this will be in top

I recently read all about good old Willy D. Porter. Sad how her luck can be so cruel to her...

Shades of Operation Petticoat here! I wonder if you ever watched that movie when you did the scene with the sub girls!

You brought up World of Warships?

Um, Navy senior brass use the "N-#" numbers to identify staff positions. "G" numbers are Army.

Whaaaaaaaat? Your story is awesome!

smith has allergies, I have dust in my eye... aw, fuck it. not a dry eye in the joint.