This was such a very unusual but fantastic story!

Hahahahaha I loved this so much!

yup we need an epilogue

That was a really great story!

This story never grows old. I suddenly felt the need to read it again, and came looking.

Love love love this. Every sentence is perfect!

Hahahahaha Epic

PLEASE continue

I laughed so hard when I read the ch.7

This fic was sooo hilarious. Amazing. Brilliant!
Moi

I love this fanfiction, I think its amazing!

Aah, this was most interesting. An epilogue would be nice, but it is not absoultly necessary. But I do wonder just what spell Draco used and just why he did it and why he didn't want to un-do it?

This is a really good story, you need to write an epilogue. Love the story!

I LOVE YOUR STORY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH YOUR STORY! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

It’s been forever etched into my mind. Every time I think of Hermione and Severus, I will think of two snakes doing… yeah. Well, actually two mating snakes fits the story well because snakes actually seem to be passionate in mating unlike say… a turtle. And no, I don’t usually watch animals mate – well, I breed turtles so… well, yeah. And I think the humor in your story has addled my brain because I’m not usually this off-topic.

*ahem*

Excellent story! Normally, I do not and will not read a story that categorized in “humor.” I’m not exactly sure how or why I picked up your fic to begin with, but as soon as read the first chapter I saw that it was better than the other humor fics I have glanced at. Most humor fics, the characters are unreal, the setting ludicrous, there is something supposedly “funny” about every line, and I have a headache within five minutes. Your story actually had its serious moments. That is, it was overall lighthearted but not completely nonsensical. And the funny moments really were funny, and I enjoyed the laugh.

The story was good and creative. Although I could predict where the story was leading, I’ve never read another story like it (that’s good). That brings up and interesting point – why did you put it under the category parody as well? Maybe I missed something?

The writing was overall excellent (although it was double-spaced between lines). Also, it was a bit quick when you skipped the four years. It caused the pacing to go… a bit weird. However, the ending was fairly good although an epilogue would have been nice.

If by some chance you read this (I realize it’s been years since this story was posted), then you should know that neither of your links to your “newer” fanfiction work. It could be it’s just me – or that the sites are forever gone… but yeah.