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AAHHAHA YES YES YES

oooh i like this, so is Snape going to use his heart and magic to create tons of AWESOME SPELLS? ahah yes

AHAAHHAHAH YES I LOVE IT

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Your story is so. Freaking. AWESOME!

I love the plot development, and the character development is phenomenal. I also like that, even though you said you don’t like James Potter too much, you still didn’t throw him under the bus. Severus’ backstory makes a LOT of sense, and the reason why Lily broke off the friendship in the previous timeline also makes phenomenal sense. I love you word choice, but I have to agree that the romance thing happened too quickly. With that said, your writing pace felt like it was more than two weeks, so I felt awed when I realized that it was only taking place over two weeks. Maybe you can skip over a little bit and not put so much detail into a single day. Though I understand that you won’t be adding more to this fanfic (I can’t wait to start reading Viridi), I loved every moment of binge-reading through it. (I even stayed up past 2AM at times.) You’re an amazing writer, and even though you might not see this message, I still hope that you’ll keep at the good, wholesome work you’ve produced so far going. Bravo! You have my full support on your fanfics.

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