Nice and sad.

Oh so sad but it had to be. Thanks for the read

wow I read the next installments first sorry but it is good you are a good writer

How sadly beautiful - and yet somehow so much more perfect than the way it went on tv. Things just a little more resolved made everything a little better. Lisbon telling Jane of her love and him actually telling her it would destroy him all over again. Wow. Their parting was better although still a bitter pill for both of them. Red John just kept on giving even after his death. Can you tell I really liked this one shot?

Very powerful story full of strong emotions given with a realistic way.

Amazing story...you made me cry...thanks for writing !

Oh my god this is a beautiful story and I wish this would have actually happened!

Omg! Did you really have to write, "Leaving you is going to destroy me all over again"? That line did me in...goner! Nice story.

A well written emotional story. Glad that you keep writing stories because we need good stories more than ever, since there aren't new episodes to delve ourselves in to anymore. Good luck!

oh my god this is so good!

Very nicely written. Feels quite real. Who knows, maybe . like that did happen. Always thought Jane saying goodbye did in some way happen even if we didn't see it. Well you know, Jane often surprised with his actions and ideas, so why not saying goodbye to Lisbon is one of them? :-)

It's beautiful eventhough it didn't happen.

I wish they've had the courage to show us something like this in canon...Thank you :)

Beautiful ... maybe something like this did happen.

exciting. well-written. thanks for this.