CH ... 1 I was a bit sceptical because is just the beginning, but really has potential.
Ash is relatively very inventive but otherwise very nice person. I hope he could be even more inventive, learn new tricks and techniques and train his future team.
And I hope when Aura in Ash will activate and be a translator and try to do aura attacks as well .

Bye now

This is great! I know it's just a one part challenge response, but I wish you could update this!

I presume that druddigon is carrying ash in the bridal position. Glameow could just stand on the indent on druddigons head.

Please update I love how the story started!

interesting start so I hope you revive and update this

Good story y'ave here

are you going to continue this story

Please add more to this story will ash survive the attack is he scarred for life

This is great.

I can't wait for more.

Awww! I love this so far!

Please continue your story! I'm very interested on how you started, it's very unique and different compared to other fanfics that has the same plot as you. (The whole 'Pikachu abandoned Ash' thing.)

Hmm good start old love to see this devolped more

Please update this story

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Keep these stories going I would like to see them finished.