This is absolutely amazing, I love where it sounds like you were planning on going with this story and I really hope you decide to pick it up again! Hope you're doing well 3

Love this so much!

Quite the wild ride going on here. It's too bad that after everything that's happened she still has to return to Pete's world.

Please update this story soon..Please!

This is so freaking fantastic and I hate that it hasn't been updated in years. I really, really, hope you someday return to it, though it's unlikely.

I know it has been 3 years but please please please tell us how it ends!

All I want for Christmas 2018 is to know where the rest of this story is.

Holy sh!t there's so much useless tangent in this story...

This story was amazing! I have now read it twice which is extremely rare for me! Usually once I read something I don't like to read it again. Your story was written so well that I enjoyed as if it was the first time! I laughed and was teary eyed st different parts but that us part of what makes it so great! I really enjoyed all the different POV you provided. Its always interesting to know what the other characters are feeling or thinking!
Another thing I really liked was how you portrayed Rose. In your story she didn't stay the same as she was during her time with the Doctor. As painful and horrible as the events were that she experienced, it gives her more maturity and depth. I'm not sure how to explain what I mean. I do think what you mentioned in response to a review about how the Doctor will have to help her like she did him, is a great idea! I think it would only increase their closeness and relationship.
You also made it easy to read by breaking up the sections of the story which kept things clearer for me at least. I realize it has been a long time since you updated but I'm hoping that you will come back ti complete it!

so it's been like 3 years but i just found this and it's fantastic and i want mooooooooorrre

Ahhhh lmao I hate you for this entire fic kill me pls

Love the story but I don't like the flashbacks most have no bearing on the story at all

Ugh! It absolutely GUTS me this probably won’t be continued! Yet I’ve become accustomed to disappointment from fanfics :(
Oh well! Enjoyed it while it lasted!

Why don't you just have Rose dropped off in a universe where she's never had to use the vortex and likely won't ever need to? Say, the one where she helped on a farm?

Still the separation, but at least Jackie doesn't lose Rose and then her memories of Rose. Probably.

This story is intense. Like holy shit. I'm so absolutely obsessed with it, it captures every character exactly as I've ever saw them and in ways beyond d what I could imagine, I love it so so much. Like damn. I'm so invested, I can't wait to see how you tie it all together with rose and eleven and this story has me shook. Like think about it randomly during the day and just smile and reflect on how rad and complex it is. You last updated before Christmas of 2015 though and since it is now summer of 2017 I'm twice as shook that I won't see the end of this. Please tell you haven't abandoned this. Or died. Or something horrible.