great new story naruto can be seen trying to calm down hinata relax

I liked the one-shot!

You should write more

You stole the beginning scene from a hentai manga

pleas make more of this its good

this was nice cool story

This was good but not great lots of flaws like where the fuck did those sound nin come from, how the fucked did they capture Naruto even if he let his guard down after training he wouldn't have been captured like that ESPECIALLY from no name SOUND NINJA like da fuck. And since when is anko b-cup, im gonna say that was a typo cause in the lemon scene you called her breast large and last time I checked b-cups were fs70/f/2012/243/8/6/anko_mitarashi_by_gon_
Do those look b-cup to you

are you planning to make more lemon oneshots?

Uh, wow, seriously? Some random fucking sound shinobi, two of whom got taken out by a simple fucking kunai, managed to capture Naruto from after his training trip?

Fuck man, you wanna write a naruto/anko lemon, more power to you. But either skip any hint of plot, or make it fucking plausible! The Naruto who kills S-class ninja like they're nothing, gets captured by four random nobody ninja, and not even from a real village, but from fucking Sound...

Well, this was a good lemon in this chapter. Not bad for your first.

The only down side in my opinion is there was not mention of a womb or Naruto's fear of impregnating Anko.

Will there be lemons in your other stories?

That was sweet!

Very nice lemon one shot chapter. Well written and good dialogue. Keep up the good work.

Really enjoyed this story but shame it's only a one shot.

Really enjoyed reading this... NarutoXAnko is in my top 3 favorite pairings so good job with how you did everything

Nice:)