THIS IS SO GOOD oh my gosh i really hope you're continuing with this

YO YO YO! I finally got the chance to read this story and I'm super hyped about it :D Ari is so sassy omg, I love her already! Alright, future otp meeting for the first time awe shit, awe shit, I am a ready. I don't know whether I should be suspicious of Mady or just hope that Ari doesn't eat her lol YES, FUCK HIM UP ARI FUCK HIM UPPPPPPPPP! Oh, I love the detail in your writing honestly. I loved the first chapter and I'm excited to read further into this story :)

Can we like talk about Maddy? SHES MY NEW CHILD I LOVE HER JFC! Loving it Bri!

YES Ari and Stiles! I ship them so fucking hard baby you have no idea! Talk about feelz!

BOO Katarina! You evil bitch leave my babies alone!

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YOU DID NOT PREPARE MY FOR THIS! You said I might need something to hug! I need something to throw! Like at Kat's face if I could. DON'T YOU FUCKING TOUCH HER PRECIOUS BLONDE HEAD! PLEASE! BRI! BRI! Don't do this to me... D:

Please don't hide from my horrible review. I just have a lot of feelings okay? -_- I just want my babies together and happy that's all. Post more soon. Don't leave me in this unknowing hell!

OMFG YESSSSSSSSS YESSSSSS YESSSSS I LOVED IT AND STILES INTERACTION HELLZ YEAH BITCHES LOOK LOOK YES wow sorry I went completely off track there but YES YES YESSSS

BUT AT THE SAME TIME NO NO NO BC MADDY IS IN DISTRESS AND I WANT HER AS A BEST FRIEND.

Honestly tho, aria is just... Wow. I love her. She is so interesting and a total badass, plus DEMON YESSSS

PLS update both ur stories really soon k? Cos I'm saying waiting... Seriously, dying. X

OMG I DIED OF LAUGHTER AT "YOU ATE HIM" omfg that line was priceless wow haha and poor maddy, I really love her, just putting that out there, and aria ahahaha I can't wait for that wall of hers to be broken down haha oh wow... I mean, she met LYDIA YES I LOVE LYDIA AND I KNOW LYDIA KNOWS SOEMTHING maybe it's like her banshee powers or something haha this is so exciting and is2g if she hurts maddy I will SCREAM haha awesome awesome work Bri x

OMFG OMFG OMFG AND THOSE ARE FOOD Omfg's btw. I just BRI I LOVE IT ITS SO FRESH BC ITS NOT LIKE HIGHSCHOOL FICS AND THEYRE ALL OLDER AND OMG. And I saw the name Adelaide pop up, yeah I noticed, haha I loved that small connection, and whoa can I just say... I FRICKING LOVE MADDIE ALREADY, NOT GIVING UP ON ARACELIA C SHES LONELY DAMN MADDIE is so cuteeeee eeeeek. And whoa stiles and a tattoo? Hot, hotndamn girl yes I'm just so excited for this because she's such an interesting character and SHE IS BADASS OKAY SHE IS A BADASS and I just... This is so good, I love ur writing it's so like, you know, flows well and you write like super good, you must rock at english in school hehe. Amazing, simply amazing bb ️

BABY I LOVE IT
I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

This chapter was perfect! I loved it! I loved your repetition and the way you worded things and it was just all together lovely. And omfg the whole beginning with Aracelia just sitting in a park was so upsetting because I doubt she had a normal childhood and just ughhh. But then the way you described Stiles was hella cute. Like. Yes. And he is definitely holding back some information. And I loved the bar scene! It was great ;) And just this whole LA vibe that's going on in your fic just makes the story so fun to read. And the ending! Aracelia's mom is scary af. Like if I were Maddy I'd think she was going to kill me too! Amazing chapter Bri! I love reading this fic and I can't wait to find out what happens next! :)

AGH Maddy! GTFO. The intensity is so high in the last part of your chapter, I am so glad you ended there. Great chapter Bri! From start to finish. I love ready Aria and Stiles, c'mon Stiles, you gotta be a little smoother than that ;]
Aria's mom scares the crap out of me, and everyone. Who's her FC? I think of Marcia Cross for some reason.
And yes this was def quality over quantity, you should be proud of yourself, this chapter came out perfectly!

You wrote this on your phone? Holy shit. It takes me like three minutes to write a sentence on my phone. I'm so impressed! And it was amazing. I love how you described stiles in the beginning *wolf whistle* (pun intended). Seriousluy, this far has taken me like five minutes!

can't wait for the next chapter

Oh, Maddy. My heart goes out to her. Can you IMAGINE the terror of that moment? After what she saw. The sheer confusion only hardening the horror of her memory to where she had to wonder if maybe she was wrong. I mean, when there's senselessness your mind will grasp for an answer. ANY answer except for that awful thing that couldn't possibly be real. But it is . . . O_O

All things considered, Maddy's handling this fairly well.

Aria is definitely trying to scare Maddy. But not because she WANTS Maddy to be scared of her, seems like she's actually trying to protect her. Sort of "I don't want to kill you/hurt you but I will. So go away. Go away before I do something I can't take back."

"She was forged in fire, and raised from the ashes." - Goddamn phoenix! haha

So. When you warn us that this will get graphic, why's there a question mark? Not sure? You only THINK this might get graphic. hehe Sorry, sorry. Enough screwing around. Just poking fun. I've been meaning to take a peek at Delirium since you posted it but haven't had a chance.

But, I'm here now!

And might I say . . . . YES.

Strong opening. Dialogue is smooth, very natural which I enjoyed immensely.

Aria is FASCINATING . . . . . . . . . and I'll admit. When I read the summary there's this image that popped into my head. A moon goddess. I really thought that Aria would be something along those lines. Even with that little meaty tidbit you offered - she was void - my mind stayed on the moon goddess imagery.

But Christ. THAT ENDING. -_- Bri, where did the idea for this fic come from? haha Loved it, and I'm feeling a little odd that I do.

Who gave you permission to write such a kickass chapter?
This chapter was AMAZING. Even unedited. Especially unedited... actually how in the world is your unedited work so great? My edited work still has a ton of mistakes.
ONTO THE REVIEW.
First off I love how different Maddy and Aria are. I freaking adore it. And I love that Maddy isn't just a random background character. She's got a LOT of character. I already love her. And I love her blunt remarks. They made me laugh. Not to mention they're so realistic. The first thing on a person's mind after such a night would definitely be that they're sitting in a room with a killer. Great job developing their characters. I just love reading their interactions. They're basically forced best friends at this point. Maddy's bugged Aria enough to make her feel a slight friendship, and although Aria's pushed Maddy away she's kind of responsible for her seeing the events of the night before. So in a way I feel like Aria owes Maddy her attention, at least for an explanation, which she of course dutifully supplies.
Damn Bri. You've crafted such an interesting friendship. But the supernatural line got me. I laughed out loud. It was fantastic.
But if there's one you did right in this chapter, and I mean like really really right (because there are so many things you did right), it's your description. You hit that nail spot on. You used your 5 senses and put us readers smack in the middle of a roller coaster of a day. It like I was standing in Maddy's shoes, or Aria's shoes. And let me tell you, a lot of people try to accomplish great description but you literally hit on all the right topics to spark emotions. It was great. I seriously really enjoyed reading this chapter.
I'm super interested for you to explain more of Aria's demon-ness. And I love how you tied in Lydia. Incorporating her as an intern was great. But can we please talk about Katerina. Because she's one hell of a character. I'm loving this huge contrast you have between characters, it makes things so fun to read. The ending had me on my toes. & I loved your song choice for this chapter!
Freaking great job! And I can't wait to read the next chapter!