Reviews for Schweet Deal
I'm Reader-anon chapter 11 . 8/27/2018
Okay, so I read everything and I like how each chapter and mini story has a unique idea going on behind it. Especially the ones that expand on the characters' backstories.

But this one though, I do like it more than the others. I just hoped it would continue someday
Tall T chapter 11 . 1/15/2017
The story is progressing very nicely and smoothly, but the ending took me by surprise
Antha1 chapter 11 . 1/3/2017
I thought Vanellope was going to see Ralph to see what someone outside the game remembers. But what does she want to see Jubileena about? And why is Jubileena so shocked to see her? I know! I'll bet Vanellope has been reprogrammed as the bad guy of the game! The player's goal now is to run her off the track and destroy her cart to foil her evil plan to take over Sugar Rush! Yeah, that's the ticket! It explains why she's clinging to her memories of being the ruler instead of accepting this wonderful new world. And it explains Lenny's reaction to the upgrade notes. It's perfect! Now Vanellope can go to Bad-Anon with Ralph! She'd better hope this isn't just a dream!
mon-ra chapter 11 . 1/1/2017
Feels like V is in the twilight zone. Freaky. Can't wait to see how Lenny's mods will affect the game.
Exotos135 chapter 11 . 1/1/2017
Happy New Year to you too! :)

So, Vanellope's kinda like a Steven Universe archetype?

Keep up the good work! :)
LadyFiona02 chapter 10 . 12/3/2016
Something is so wrong here...
Omega Ultra chapter 10 . 11/10/2016
Wow, I decided to come and read your latest work after like... a year and a half. And I have to say, you've changed. Your writing has become way more fluid as well as consistent. And your story telling has drawn me in.

So I have to say, great one-shot/start to a multi-shot. I rate 10/10 for an interesting start!
Tall T chapter 10 . 11/8/2016
From fluff to mystery. Wonder where this is going...
W. R. Winters chapter 10 . 11/7/2016
Sweet chapter, i wonder what will come next
Antha1 chapter 10 . 11/7/2016
Hold on Vanellope. You're not an outcast. You're still a racer. Still have your boyfriend. You have your father back. And you've been relieved of all that responsibility you didn't want. This is the kind of dream that you don't want to wake up from. So stop complaining and just go along with it!

But why are her memories different from Gloyd's? Why weren't her memories altered along with his? Something strange is going on. I'll bet it is a dream! I think that the game is in a low power mode for the update, and they're probably all dreaming now. Ah well. Best enjoy it while they can.
mon-ra chapter 10 . 11/6/2016
I'm guessing that this is going to be one of those be careful what you wish for stories. So far it's nice and sweet. Though I'm wondering how is that V isn't effected by the upgrades. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Exotos135 chapter 10 . 11/6/2016
Wow, I hope you get better buddy.

Keep up the good work. :)
Tall T chapter 9 . 9/11/2016
Not the kind of story I was expecting, at least not taking place right after the movie's climax, but it's cute. And I chuckled at Ralph's remark that he never heard that motto before :)
Antha1 chapter 9 . 8/21/2016
I'm pretty sure Ralph said Baroness Boogerface. Although it is funnier your way ... Ok fine, I'll let you have that one.

I never pictured Calhoun as Vanellope's butler. Instead of Driving Miss Daisy, it's Driving President Fart-feathers! Not to mention Jane Lynch instead of Morgan Freeman.

I'm thinking that Ralph's prank might involve water balloons disguised as bricks. Or perhaps raw eggs disguised as then, who knows, maybe he can help her prank the racers and the donuts! (We'll let the devil dogs, and Beard Papa slide.) They certainly have it coming!

Thank you, that was great! Now all we need is a chapter on Calhoun's new life as Vanellope's butler!
LadyFiona02 chapter 9 . 8/20/2016
That handyman is scary enough XD That prank might kill him lol!
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