Reviews for Fire Emblem: The Man That Never Was
DaLegendNub-BlueAlfarrel chapter 49 . 9/4/2019
*Sigh* Will this story ever continue? I've been impatient since Sev died. That redhead was one of my favorite characters.. I've been reviewing this chapter for a buncha time, I hope you'll continue someday.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2017
Historical context: Meters have only existed for a few hundred years, not when swords were used, and that's a fact.
Hikatokage chapter 48 . 8/26/2017
The extra backstory was a very nice touch; while the emotions that are being developed between the characters felt alive.
Nice chapter overall with the process of where it's going~!
Fregler chapter 47 . 7/22/2017
Well here is one person who still, gladly, reads the story.

E.F
Undying Soul98 chapter 46 . 2/28/2017
Nice chapter. Owain got some real character development here, and I'm just happy to see an update, to be honest. There is still so much to see with this fic. Honestly, this fics premise was great from the beginning and I am anxious to see where it leads (Especially all those little romantic knots) Thanks for the nice read, and good luck with the rest of this Arc. Undying Soul out.
Iron Mario chapter 45 . 11/2/2016
Hey there, I'm sorry to hear things haven't been completely well for you, but it's awesome to be able to continue reading this awesome story of yours, I can't wait to see so many things like how they obtain Gules and the other Gem, who is Robin going to end up in the end, if my suspicions about the traitor are correct, how did Robin end up in Lucina's future and so many else. Keep up the good work, hope I can read the next part soon, but I hope more that things get better for you over there before that happens.
Guest chapter 45 . 10/26/2016
Severa isn't she's judt knocked out for now. That' s my belifee
Az chapter 45 . 10/24/2016
Great to see this back and that you're doing well. The tension you've built up means that this is always worth the wait.
ShadowFenix98 chapter 45 . 10/24/2016
quite the deep psychological chapter for our friends here. It's very well done. I'll stick to this story until the end!
Undying Soul98 chapter 44 . 10/7/2016
This is a unique story that honestly deserves more success than it has gotten. For one thing, its desperately rare to see a fic dedicated to the future children, TWICE as rare to read a Futures Past fic. More than than, this premise was great, featuring Robin awakening with a very different person finding him. The dynamic of his presence in the younger group is interesting, but you don't make Robin steal the stage- everyone gets the spotlight at some point. The writing was a little iffy early on, but its been coming along. Its getting better. As for pairing- I think this is the first well written Multi fic I've read for Robin (Or at least the best I've found that actually updates). It isn't exactly a harem, but from the summary an OTT with Robin, Lucina and Severa seems inevitable- so far the romance is building up well, I just hope you treat the relationship with respect. In all honestly I think that the female Future Children I prefer are Nah and CYnthia (Especially the latter following my reading of Asleep), and while I wouldn't be opposed to a full harem fic (Figuring you could likely do it well, and as good harem fics are a guilty pleasure of mine I don't see crop up very often), if you don't go that route its fine too. Either way, it will be a real joy to see where this goes. Good luck with your writing- Undying Soul out.
Ph0enix17 chapter 20 . 10/5/2016
I used to ship Robin and Lucina but now I ship Robin and severa
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 29 . 9/2/2016
Whoowee! What an epic fight that was!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 26 . 9/2/2016
Insane chapter!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 24 . 9/2/2016
Was that hooded figure...Grima?
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 6 . 9/1/2016
Dawww! Nah is so adorable.
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