This story doesn't seem to be finished. Are you going to complete it? I love imagining a softer sweeter side of Cary. Hoping for some romance?

Poor Cary. :( you can certainly feel the weight of his anger and sadness in this chapter.

Awesome story can't wait for the next update.

Poor Bianca the guard is awful but I'm sure he isn't the only one. I get they do their job but they can show compassion sometimes.

How awful being in prison would be. I really enjoy reading this story.

Another awesome update looking forward to hear what he says to her.

Awesome update this is such a good story. Your writing Cary so well. I'm glad he is going to see her.

I feel bad for her I'm glad Cary is thinking about going to see her.

Great story, I love it.

Awesome start to your story. I'm watching Season 7 of the show now. I love Cary he is one of my favourites.

I have no idea where your going with this, and I love it! I'll be really interested to see Beonkas reaction and where the relationship goes.

This reading is a dandy indeed...continuing and building a reader's anticipation.

This is a really interesting idea! I am curious to see where you go with this one!

Nice way to build up anticipation. Good update

Oh, how I like this created development in your story ! I like Cary interested in someone who genuinely needs and wants his attention ...and shows it to him. Your Bianca character is rather like Will character in a way. I cheer for the underdog most often. Thank you for this spin. Your writing flows smoothly and is most easy to read.