THIS IS INCREDIBLE! CANT WAIT TO READ THE SEQUEL!

Wow! I like the whole story with April going to the school for ballet and all. And is that Jadis who might be showing up at the end?

I think my big confusion with the values and morals in this is there seems to be a lot of "Do as I say, not as I do." The characters frequently discuss the importance of self-control and remaining apart until marriage, but then April is seen sneaking down to talk to Peter in private.

Also, the Pevensie parents are surprised at how mature Peter is… but not that surprised. I wish you'd hit a little more on what they think of a 15 year old already planning his marriage.

I wanted to like this story. I like the concept of Peter meeting a Narnian girl on Earth, but around this chapter I got more and more disappointed in the values you're putting forth. Namely, how Peter expects April to cover herself and dress extremely modestly so she doesn't "tempt" him… while I agree to some extent that it would be unfair for April to tempt him, it strikes me as sexist for Peter to have no self-control and put all the pressure on April for them to resist temptation.

I'll keep reading anyway.

What a cliff hanger! This was a great chapter with some nice family moments. Can't wait to see what happens next with the white witch!

Really enjoyed this, thanks :)

I find this interesting. I really enjoy the chapters and cannot wait for more!

Kristy

great few chapters! really nice how peter is helping to get april's parents to be happier :)

Keep them coming, it's excellent.

Okay, I'll give in, I mostly favour Edmund rather than Peter but this..this seems truly intriguing and gosh! The way you write almost puts me to shame! This is really really great, and I love the way you spin out the romance. It's not so fast, yet not so slow that the reader gets so bored, exactly sure paced. I love it, and I'd truly love to know more :)

Oh, love this, Love you for writing it, and hope the silliness that I am writing comes out half as good! I simply cannot wait for what I know will be another smashing chapter,

K.N.

I love this because it details the Pevensies adjusting to life without Narnia. I like watching how their maturity and royal dignity translate to high school students.

Hey this is a great story! April is lovely, and I wonder how her family know? Have they been to narnia? Also I'm excited for Peter and April's relationship to develop - I'm sure Peter actually is flirty and fun - update soon :)

Well, I enjoy OC/Peter pairings, heavens knows I imagine and have my own! I have enjoyed this and I loved reading it, I await chapter six eagerly. You have done a smashing job thus far,

W.H.