Wonderful job on this! I enjoyed it a lot!

Ahhh I loved this! So well written. Great job author! Fantastic, really. Thanks for the read!

Oh this is a heart wrencher. What an excellent missing sequence, a coda, as it were, to Mystery Spot. Great job.

Outstanding epilogue for Mystery Spot! I loved how you had Sam slipping back into his solitary ways and Dean patiently (for him) worming the truth of what the Trickster did out of Sam. Wish the show had shown us some of this, but then again, if they had, we wouldn't have gotten this marvelous story from you.

This is a great fic!

The ramifications of Mystery Spot were never really seen after the episode finished, but the things about Sam that you picked out in this fic (the obsessive organisation, the inability to accept Dean's help, his silence, and so on) are certainly things that wouldn't go away so easily. After all, Sam actually lived those 6 months, and we can be pretty sure that he remembered everything that happened during that time - of course it would impact the way he acted upon returning to the Mystery Spot.

I love that here you looked at the effects that the time without Dean had on Sam and showed how they followed him back to that Wednesday and changed the way he acted around Dean. I think this is a very plausible way of Dean finding out about everything Sam went through at the Mystery Spot.

I've read a number of fanfics that deal with Dean finding out about Sam's time in the "alternate timeline" (I can't think what else to call it), but I don't remember reading any that have been done in this way. I think this is one of the best I've read! :)

Sara.B