Welp time to be the asshole who DESTRUCTIVE reviews

Don’t watch inspirational videos
Don’t keep it Up not like us fans love watching him suffer
Don’t understand We love your story
Don’t comprehend how much we’re gonna wish for another chapter
Do however take this advice seriously after all foolishness is another aspect of Wisdom like stupidity is knowledge that shouldn’t be repeated

I am the ENEMY no plans Shall survive

When are you going to continue if you abandoned it, let me know do not wait

But chinese new year isn’t near december at all!

The only bad thing I have to say is that a three years old doesn’t have the motor skills to cook at all. At four he could start with some basic but until five or six is when he would really the motor skills to do it, six more like it.

So is not that he doesn’t know or he doesn’t reach the stove, but his hands, armas and coordination wouldn’t let him.

Please continue the story, it is a very good story, it fills me with intrigue what will happen next that if there were a battle between Marquis Sasha Dejanstahl Voban and if that happens what consequences will it bring, although I would like Emiya to have his first authority soon so that they start the anime story and be able to know your version of erica and liliana

Good. But another junk

Cole and Alyssa Evans the Red and White Wild Force Post Rangers, cool, but we're they Rangers in this universe or are they just the douplegangers of the Rangers in this fic? lol.

Please update this story

Personally, I think that having a Reality Marble qualifies Emiya to be a God in his own right.

golden light? shouldn't it be blue wisps. gilgamesh summons things with gold portals, but mana/prana/od is generally depicted as blue.

I just realized something. With both this story and wrought iron cross you created a set of very unique circumstances that can make things quite interesting. That being that this story and wrought iron cross can be parallel timelines. Sure it'd take some ingenuity to make it work but it could work since Zelretch is here. And him being a troll I don't see how it wouldn't be beyond him to either switch the two Shirous or anyone else between the two timelines. Just food for thought other than that I hope you continue both these stories they are really fun reads

when will be the update?

I hope you guys update this. Or continue the older one.( Wrought iron cross) Both are good reads

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