the amount of time you used the word ghoul in one paragraph- one sentence even, is disheartening.

So do humans just accept that ghouls exist? where do the ghouls get their food do they just randomly kill people or do they have some stock of humans somewhere

I say continue. You've managed to capture put attentions and hold us captive - a sign of a writer. The fact that you've done something so utterly unique is also commendable, and I believe that you should stick this through till the end. If by, say, 10 chapters, you're still not happy with it, you could re-write, but I think that you should push ahead with this version first. Thank you.

HAAAAAAAAAI CATHY I JOINED!
- Maddy ;)

I will admit I was a bit skeptical about reading this. However I stuck with my three-chapter try before passing judgement. You have an interesting thing going on here and you managed to kill my skepticism. So I'll be waiting for more.

Well, that was a rather short chapter.
Will you continue this fic?

Oh my god! I really miss this anime! It was my favorite two years ago! And I did remember the day when I published my first fanfic in FMA fandom…
Anyway, this crossover is promising!
Okay! I will read the next chapter then ;)

This is an interesting reimagining of the FMA story. I have never watched Tokyo Ghoul but now I guess I better check it out.

Not bad. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.