Hello there.

I have to say i am really loving the way you write. Its intoxicating to read. I probably will end up reading and review many of your works. I am disappointed that this one has been update in a while. Please tell you will continue with it? Its a great piece and very original! I did find it amusing the reuse of the names from your previous work. It was fantastic read and i will definitely be leaving reviews each chapter carefully. I pray you will keep writing and keep up the great work! You are fabulous writer!

Things Are Starting To Get Interesting.
Nice Becoming A Seems Fair.
I Hated It When He Was Told He Can't Go To Heaven Or Hell And Would Exist As Nothing In The Series.
I Seriously Like Your Idea.

I actually quite like Near, but you're making me hate him, which is actually good. Can't wait for the installment!

Yes, Noriko! Take charge! Get your man! Fuck up Near's plans! I love it!

Also, yay for Light taking over, hopefully for good, but that's a bit too optimistic isn't it?

I love it. Wonderful chapter!

ohhh this was such a good chapter
i love the parenting!
im a super maternal type of person so reading this warms my heart
who knew Light would be contender for dad of the year
i wish light was my dad
...minus the whole kira and death thing lol

This chapter nearly made me cry and you did a great writing it. I really liked reading it!

Even though i kind of wanted Kira's motives to be mysterious, this chap was pretty good! You’re really good at describing Noriko's turmoil.

Ugh, so much conflict! I don’t think my heart can handle it! DX

Sever. That is the perfect title for the chapter.

She can’t trust anyone. Oopsie daisy Near you just made it worse and now Kira can manipulate her even more!

wow, this so good! so much better than the last one! And I like how you added a darker topic, it makes much more sense on how she feels, and pretty relatable.

I found two things creepy, though.

Mysterious girl covered in blood. There is a high chance she could be a murderer, or a psycho animal killer, oh well, bring her in my house!
Im also really creeped out at how nice they are after a while. they were really acting like kidnappers to me. acting super nice to what appears to be an innocent poor girl, and how they insisted on giving her free food, Ritsu coincidently showing up, being overly nice to her, seeing blood like it's normal (Warning! Warning!), the family insisting, no, FORCing her to stay. When you're depressed you will want any kind of affection, but when you step back a little from this family, don't they seem a little TOO NICE!? Before it was ok, they just being nice, but as it goes on it felt stranger and stranger, and then at the end i was thinking, KIDNAPPERS ALERT! KIDNAPPING MURDERERS ALERT! ABORT, ABORT!

Still, amazing story! I really cant wait for the next chapter! and when her 'family' finds out about her assaulting and suicide attempt! i really want matsuda, raku, nears points of view on it! hopefully they know about the attempt next chapter! i really really cant wait! XD

This is really surreal writing! Great job!

Can Near be the knew Kira? That'd be a very interesting twist. The strange deaths are supposedly still occuring. And I could see Near occasionally using the Death Note if he felt justified enough. Not so much to kill suspects, as to manuver them towards his end game.

He's never shown me a particularly strong moral compass. Of course, Light is apparently still alive in this AU although he'd be what? 40? So it could be him commiting the occasional murder.

Regardless this whole thing is screwed up, and Near is 100% in the wrong. You'd think he'd know better than to create a self-fulfilling prophecy like this.

Ugh, she's going to follow in Kira's foot-steps? I don't like that, especially not when she's largely acting out of pain. It's not that she agrees with Kira's ideals, it's that she's pissed her "parents" lied to her.

But she's being really childish right now.

She says she understands, but does she? Because it makes perfect sense why the man who adopted her didn't want her growing up knowing she was the child of a mass murderer. Or that he'd had to take him out. She's so quick to turn her back on Matsuda, but he's apparently been the only one on her side her whole life.

And the fact that they never changed her name in honor of her mother, kept all of her records safe, and let her schools know, largely implies they were going to tell her. Most likely when she started University and her funds became available to her.

Anyway, this is a great fic, and I'm interested in where this is going. But I've got to say, if Noriko blindly goes down the same path as Light I'm gonna be disappointed in her. Because I thought she was smarter than that.

Aww, you played the song from the Death Note musical! I actually really like that song. :)

Poor Noriko, she's really shook and she's surrounded herself with the worst people. Both Sango, who would throw her to the dogs for a boy, and then Pari who would do the same to get out of the sleepover. If she wanted to go home she should have just left. Or put her footdown with the makeover. Instead of just trashing through everyone's feelings like that.

I figured it out about three paragraphs before your reveal. That was some really good writing, though. All the times people compared her to Light, and Sango asking if she would act like Misa if her love died. Well done.
I hope she realizes that she's still Kouji's sister, even if not biologically. That kid idolizes her! And her dad still cares for her!