Reviews for A Kiss In The Rain - Swan Queen |
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![]() ![]() I don't remember when there was the last time when I've read a story that made so emotional as this one. I was clenching my fists almost all the time in those intense moments, I was so absorbed in what was happening. Also it had a great build up. I was just waiting, all tense and stressed, for the moment they meet. This story is amazing. I'm so happy that I stumbled across this. Thank you so much for writing such an amazing, beautiful story. |
![]() ![]() I loved this so much! You are a very talented writer! Great dialogue and description and I felt like it was really them. Heard their voices as I read. I write too :) but never confident enough to post anything yet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you have to continue this!love it! |
![]() ![]() the progression was nice and slow and almost so perfect, i was clinging on to every damn word to the very end. the way they had that little convo and sparked up so much more. PERFECT! |
![]() ![]() sooo funny! i loved it very much! |
![]() ![]() This is sooo beautiful and angsty! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done on the erotic parts. Snow's reaction was classic but expected. I think David would have more reservations about a relationship between Emma and Regina. Also, given the size of the apartment it's unlikely that Henry wouldn't have heard any of the conversations going on around him. Henry also is a sneaky kid. He would have been listening for more information about his Mom. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Snow needs a reality check. So... I'm supposed to be getting ready for work. But I may need to shower again |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha, Snow is so incredible naïeve and stupid Glad David can accept the feelings Emma has for Regina And Red...glad you brought Red in this to spice things up The conversation between Emma and Regina, pfff that was hard, pushing away feelings the way Regina did Pushing away Emma, damn... But then she came looking for Emma, yes...only to tell her to stay away from her...afraid of her own feelings for Emma...afraid to be rejected No, not with Emma Thanks for the feels |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great one shot especially the end. Oh poor naive snow ;) |
![]() ![]() OH MY GOSH THIS IS AMAZING. I really loved this! All of it l, you did such a good job :) |
![]() ![]() Ohhh my gosh the suspense was killing me! Thought this was gonna turn into an angst fic x) This was SO we'll written! The build up was great, so was the dialogue, the characters were spot on (I love DenialSnow lmao) this was one of the best SQ fics I've read in a while. Wow:D Amazing work |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! This is perfect I love it... hehehehehe *happy dance* And the way you wrote Snow was FUNNY AS HELL bahahahahahaha |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very very good. |