| Reviews for Deerperfalls |
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  sorry if you can chapter 6 . 10/1 my sis wants you to make a thing about mable sorry if you cant |
 Frostytail chapter 20 . 3/14 Iove this book |
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/8/2019 Deeper is best |
| PIGGY chapter 15 . 9/18/2018 why don't you just call her pacicass it saves time |
| piggy chapter 12 . 9/18/2018 u r evil. *goes to other room* WHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY? |
| Tyrone666 chapter 20 . 6/11/2018 That was an amazing story |
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/8/2018 Aww so sad. I wish that never happens to me |
| NBoss01 chapter 20 . 3/31/2018 well... I am disappointed... I am disappointed at the fact that everything just returned to normal. I really liked this story. The emotional buildup, the plot, the follow through, but that ending was to "oh nothing really happened". Other than that, your story was truly amazing. I remember when I first saw this in 2015 and read most of it, it was as good as I remember! Hope you continue writing. |
| NBoss01 chapter 19 . 3/31/2018 hmmmm |
| NBoss01 chapter 1 . 1/24/2018 Loved how this chapter was carried through... |
| NBoss01 chapter 1 . 1/22/2018 The last time I read this story it was probably in 2015 or even 2014 and I vaguely remember that it was great but as I learned, my old memories about things being good are wrong and they are normally bad. But This story, reading it over, is as good as I remembered. The characters are not OOC, the story is actually great and the expressiveness of emotion and feelings is believable. I'm glad there's people like you to make these great stories. |
| Mister L chapter 20 . 9/24/2017 This was perfect! Thank you so much for writing this! |
| Wingdings13 chapter 14 . 8/7/2017 SHIT :'( |
| Raven chapter 20 . 5/20/2017 I would have preferred that mabel died or that dipper will remain as deer |
| Guest chapter 18 . 4/29/2017 Okay die story ist wirklich toll und ich bin froh das du sie geupdated hast, aber in diesem chapter sind wirklich einige Rechtschreibfehler, der schlimmste war 'steam' (dampf) statt 'strrrrrream' (Bach) mit R oder 'punishing' statt 'punshing her fist'...dinge wie 'now' statt 'no'...'she' statt 'he' vielleicht korrigierst du das irgendwann noch. |
