Ok I stumbled upon this story and I just have to say how good it is and how good of a writer you are! Combing the show, comics, and your own original storylines is amazing! I didn’t know if you are continuing this story butttt I really hope so

I loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooovoooove it

Awwww. I LOVE it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much

Didn't you have several scenes in the beginning of the story where she used water bending? So surely both her and Zuko should already know this?

Wow. Sokka and Suki is going to get Married and the have a child on the way? That is good. I wounder when Aang will ask Katara to married him and if Zuko will married Kahlee. What will Azula be doing then? Leve or stay then? Love this story. More chapters please.

Wow! I remember when I was on FF more frequently a few years ago I really enjoyed this story. I logged in after a year and happily noticed that you updated the story. I have to admit that I binge read all the chapters Destiny in less than a week lmao. Great job on this chapter! 3

Please continue

Yes continue this story. What will happen now to Kahlee and to Azula? What wiil the bee doing now? Please write more chapters. Its been soooooooooooooo long now i saw this story. Update more often please.

Please please please update! Can’t wait to read more x

I really love this story. It's one of the best ATLA ones. Keep up the good work! :) x

oh my god
this chapter was so good
excellent
I can't wait for next chapter
update soon please

Kahlee and Zuko's relationship is the epitome of a 'will they, won't they' scenario except in their case it's kind of will they actually stay together or just break up. So it is annoying having them constantly break up all the time cause like they deserve to be happy together after everything so just let them have it :(. Your plot holes are kind of interesting, but they do leave a lot of room for explaining. Like how tf does this mindbending stuff even work? How can Ozai even do it if he's a firebender? Does that make him a dual-bender, lol? And I too am one of those sticklers for grammar but the only problem I see is the lack of comma's before punctuation marks. Just doing it like this: "That's your problem," she said. would be enough improvement. So don't get too down about one review, because reviews are always there for constructive criticism and I think that's what they were trying to get across because they didn't just outrightly say 'this story is garbage' because it isn't garbage. You're doing a good job, and every author is never perfect. Even some of the best authors have faults in their writing.

That last review has made me so mad tf is their problem . I LOVE THIS STIRY AND YOUR WRITING. Kahlee is probs the best oc I’ve read and I love the AU parts, I was one of the people who messages u a year ago when u were thinking of ending this and told U that it’s the thing that is keeping me going and that still counts DO NOT LET ANYONE MAKE U THINk UR NOT A GOOD WRITER

i dont like how this story has turned out, and not because its gone AU from the plot but because of what youve done to kahlee and zukos relationship. one minute theyre together and then theyre not. and how youve reduced azula to just kahlee's side girl is even worse especially with how azula reacted when they first broke up. sure, azula wouldve been upset but she wouldnt have gone that far. these plot choices you make almost seem like they were pulled out of nowhere like that mindbending bullshit and kahlees mother. the whole 'second avatar' thing made NO SENSE because there can only be another avatar if the avatar died and aang never died before he was frozen in the iceberg. it would help if you applied more backstory instead of relying so much on speech to carry this story on even though your grammar in that area could also be improved. again, im not snotting on the story as a whole im just saying that there are a lot of things that could be improved on.

Awwww
Poor Zuko
I hope they get back together sooner