Ngl, I really appreciate you showing Hermione's, er, less admirable traits here. As much as I indulge in Harmony fluff, it's refreshing to find fics featuring their flaws: namely, Hermione's jealousy and, well, self-assured attitude that she's definitely in the right (even when she's not), and Harry's shame of speaking about his pain, even to the point of avoiding bringing up that he's seeking therapy at all. It shows that even the best, loving couples have their flaws and I love that.

And the image of Harry backing away from Hermione's fury made me grin because NOBODY messes with an angry Hermione Granger/Potter! XD

Be cautious about things like content and legalities, but also some nice stuff and more H/Hr is a great thing.

very well written! :)

cool

Usually, I love Harmony, and I've read stories where one suspects the other of cheating, and they usually don't bother me. This one, though, I kind of believe Harry was way too forgiving of Hermione and her lack of trust in him. But I can understand that he was dealing with a lot of stuff already, and he didn't want to deal with something new, so it was better off for him to simply forgive.
There were a couple of SPaG errors, but there was nothing major.
I liked how Ginny had faith in Harry and his devotion to her and how the whole talk of pregnancy provided bookends to the story.
Nice one-shot.

Wow! I love stories with a Happy Ending ! I mean when I first saw the stories I thought that Harry was cheating Hermione with Ginny. Yep. I was very wrong on that matter and I couldn't be more happy. I am a fan of canon couples but I do enjoy from time to time well written Harmony stories. And your story is one if those. I really enjoyed much.
You dissolved my worries from the start establishing the relationship between Ginny and Dean.
You had me in tension until the very end .Honestly of the emotions and feelings.
I love how you portrayed Hermione and Harry.
I almost believed that he was indeed cheating. Almost.
Good job with the story. I loved it.

Great story!

Aw

fluff

As far as I'm concerned, Harry's been one big walking bundle of PTSD since his first year at Hogwarts ... and probably since his parents died and Dumbledore dumped him on the Dursleys' doorstep. It's amazing - to me, at least - that he didn't have a complete breakdown in fifth year. And, no, trashing Dumbo's office following Sirius's death doesn't even come close to what I mean.

Frankly, I think Dumbo is completely I'll-equipped to be a headmaster. He might be smart, but has absolutely no idea how to deal with a kid like Harry. Putting aside the fact that Dumbo himself has had a hand in most of the trauma Harry has had to endure, I consider the way he imprisons Harry every year at the Dursleys - immediately following some horrible trauma at school - to be criminal. No counseling, no friendly human contact, often no communication of any kind with anyone who cares about him ... DumDum is lucky Harry didn't commit suicide following the load he dumped on him after the DoM.

Hermione isn't as smart as I thought she was if she was unaware that Harry's nightmares had returned. I guess I'm surprised she wasn't on the watch for that to back up on him.

Lovely

awesome story
you should write post hogwarts harry and hermione full story

Believe it or not that was the first fic i heard with news of pregnancy in it and i am glad it was a good first for me:) Really liked ginny Hermione dynamic but the star of the fic was the auror named Savage! Lol i couldn't stop laughing at that. Welldone dear!

Terrific!

Angsty fluff, a weird combination, but it works. Harry as PTSD always made sense to me. In canon, his whole remembered life is a series of traumatic stress episodes after all.

TGM