Loved this!

Damn you, BonneyQ. Damn you!
Gray and Juvia are SO obvious, that I always think - "Why is there any need to write fanfiction about them? EVERYTHING is said in the manga, no room for imagination!"
BUT, big but, here you are, writing so crazy stuff that is SO GOOD, that you actually made me a Gruvia-Fan. Congrats!
And now I'm going to read ALL your Fairy Tale-Stuff XDD

I WOULD NEVER FORGIVE GRAY IF I WERE JUVIA 'I'D KILL HIM! HES A DAMN ARSEHOLEE!

Yeah! Angry Juvia...I love it and it's a natural human reaction that everyone normal human expresses when someone steps all over or in this instance leaves you. Juvia is the only character in the manga that is treated with so much disrespect by the creator himself that it makes you wonder why he created her in the first place.

Haha Natsu-san

i liked your version of what juvia should have felt.. i mean, she has to be mad at him! that was what lacked in the manga though, i was really hoping gray would realize his fault. i know he did, but i prefer it like in your story! and juvia is too soft on gray! uhuuu! anyway! super nice story, as always ;)

yeah I thought she should have been mad too

Been looking for this fic, and man do I wish this was canonized in the manga. I do feel that Juvia deserves to be angry, and I was ehh about how their reunion actually turned out.

Great job writing this with a serious tone. Good writing overall, and choice of words for dialogue.

Nice story, good luckies with your future stories.

Totally love it love it love it love it

The latest chapter is out and Juvia is... yeah you know but it doesn't matter anyway because this is cuteeee!

I can't imagine Juvia to be so angry with Gray actually. But your story is very good and it makes sense though. I'm still thinking maybe they are dating haha. Then again, they are closer now (look at Juvia stripping together with Gray! Aren't they cute?). Gray should actually admit his feelings.

Anyways. I can't comment things here although there's a grammar mistake. But it is well-written :') I just love your writing and really, you can make Gruvia in-character.

I love you, Bonney. Thank you so much for writing this. Please keep on writing :)

xoxo.
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Yeah she should but she loves Gray than anything so...XD

And of course they make her into a joke character with no development instead. Kinda pisses me off a bit.

Although I had to look twice because I couldn't believe Juvia stripped too lol

Juvia would make more sense to be evil! I hadn't thought of that!

I understand the reasons why you'd write this and sadly ( hope I'm totally wrong) know it might be as you said oír dejar Juvia won't appear 'til much later.
Going back to the story I daré to say that ,appart from the kiss, it could be totally posible and you acomplished to make imagine this as an anime episode, so thank you so much I appreciate it