aight so we got whitebeard shanks and rayleigh

who next

So awesome that I’m your 500 reviewer! Love this story soooo much!

I made myself sad because of this chapter.
She counted to 300, and Pops was there. Like he said.
And I just pictured the aftermath of Marineford. Flick just keeps counting to 300, but her Papa wont show up anymore. And I made myself sad! TToTT

Well, Smoker was only just raised to the post of Vice Admiral after the time skip, which is almost ten years after this timeline. So having him be more than an officer or Ensign is kind of feeling like you’re manhandling the story. But you do you.

Uh, “as weak as an ant” kinda means “not weak at all” since an ant can life tens of times its body weight... but other than that, super cute!
...I may have read it wrong, but why am I getting a suspicion that Flick is from Ohara?

This chapter got me sobbing

I feel like poor little Sabo is just a back ground character. I hope to see more of him soon! other then that love your book

Loved reading this!

LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH It has humor and heart and fight and peace and just URGGGHHH beautiful. Thank you for writing such a heart warming story.

her mother is his brother?...ok then

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I feel so very sad for harp. I hope he can reunite with his grandchildren and make amends.

I am now at chapter21 and HOW? I mean seriusly how did you come up with this story god dammit. I love it and god I don't like reading strorys that make me feel sad because I simply go into denail and stopp reading but I can't because O love flick! And don't you dare let Blackbeard kill thatch! She has suffered enought.
Thank you. Thank you for writing this story I love it and am looking forward to see all her adventures and how you will fit the strawhats into this story or if luffy will have other nakama.

I don't understand why you put yellow as one of shanks band colour why not green?

Oh my god, i'm a reader and I know they aren't dead. Yet you write with such feelings that made me cry. Damn, you're awesome.