Reviews for Start of a Legend
adbelvd chapter 5 . 2/4/2019
Buena historia, una secuela sería interesante.
timberwolfst chapter 2 . 11/30/2018
You might want to add a line or two about his 6 pokemon limit being suspended while he was training. It would give a reason why he has so many with him.

Also the doll thing might have just been psychic illusion, not physical transformation.
Tilty.bbb chapter 5 . 10/31/2018
This was a fantastic read well done
hZJ336bhUEG7cs chapter 4 . 9/13/2018
Okay, to all the people like me who are confused as to why he called Arcanine a ‘Legendary’ pokemon, it’s because in the Pokedex, he’s labelled as the ‘Legendary Pokemon’. So he’s the ‘Legendary Pokemon’, but he’s not a legendary.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/1/2018
Pretty good please continue I think giving ash mew was a perfect opening to a mew two in the future and possibly a showdown with Giovanni for mew but keep up the good work .
X. Nightshade21
Reality demon chapter 5 . 4/9/2018
wait one sec ERZA as in ERZA SCARLET...FAIRYTAIL YUSSSSSZSSSS
Alex2909 chapter 5 . 11/25/2017
kickass story
CCSakuraforever chapter 5 . 11/21/2017
Esta muy bueno el fics mas el nuevo nivel de ash y su entrenamiento con sus pokemon más los que capturó más el campeonato en la liga kanto si hace una secuela
hugp1x chapter 1 . 11/18/2017
Talking to his Pokemon and Harem? No thanks. Not for me.
jbadillodavila chapter 1 . 10/29/2017
Genial kj
Guest chapter 5 . 10/25/2017
No just no
Banjo the Fox chapter 5 . 9/30/2017
Excellently done!
Banjo the Fox chapter 1 . 9/29/2017
Excellently done first chapter, enjoyable read!
Xyori Nadeshiko chapter 5 . 9/27/2017
ehhh no es justo... crei que habria secuela T-T
JAIMOL chapter 5 . 9/26/2017
A magnificent story.
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