I really enjoyed what there was of this, though I’m sad it was never finished I’m Happy with how the story went and defiantly worth the read.

don't you just love when you start writing a new story and you just love it so much. you just want everyone to read it and love it too

I always struggle when people write Hermione having a problem with vampires or viewing them as monsters. This is the same person that kept a werewolf's secret and protested the slavery of house elves. Plus I feel fighting a war would give you the opinion that having a friend/family member alive anyway you can, especially when there is a 'vegetarian' diet option.

i hope you come back and finish this story. it is so good.

Getting irritated by Hermione not telling the truth

is there going tp be more

Is this story abandoned?

I just finished reading this story pretty much in one sitting and I love it.
I would love if you would continue it, but I understand if you can't or won't.

I think I remember Hermione being related to Embry and Sam. One because Sam and Embry share the same father, which is a Uley.

Well I can tell you this much that a Hermione and Stargate SG1 crossover wouldn't be all that interesting. I've tried watching Stargate before and I didn't like it. Hell it was as boring as Star Wars... so I wouldn't at all be interested in reading it if a crossover like that was ever written. Anyone who has an interest in watching or reading a fanfiction with stargate in it must be pretty boring themselves. But then again that is just my opinion and I think that everyone is free to their own opinion on things.

I hated Sam at this part. He was a complete asshole, and disregarded the fact that killing the baby while still inside Bella would have killed Bella who's still a human. The treaty forbids killing humans, and forbids vampires turning humans in forks, or going on the res. I wanted to kill him for even considering killing an innocent baby though a lot of people wouldn't see the baby as innocent, especially the wolves.

Hahahah I loved Paul's commentary through Hermione's entire story of her years at Hogwarts. He wasn't calm through it all at all! xD I hate that Hermione left out a very important part of her story - that she should have mentioned when telling him everything. It doesn't matter if it was traumatic it is still a part of her story and therefore shouldn't have been kept out of her explanation. After all he's her imprint and he's hers. So I just thought it would have been fair if she was completely honest with him when she explained everything.

1: I'm pretty sure I've read this before. But I can't remember when I've read it.
2: I'm not british but have picked up on some mistakes where the british slang comes in. Since Hermione is british and I have a english boyfriend and a english sort of adopted brother.
3: This is getting interesting the more I read it. Keep up the good work. It's very well written despite where in some places where capitals are expected but isn't there. Like I'm, and I'll, and occasionally their names lack capitals but that's okay I suppose. I really like it.

you changed from past tense writing in chapter 10 to present tense in Chapter 11

please come back and update soon... this is so good!