Reviews for A Weighted Lesson
tmntfanforever852 chapter 1 . 5/14
Love the story and truth is you could of exaggerated the weight alot more do to the world biggest turtle was a little over 2000 pounds in real life and here's a site I found
articles/ 2007-08-15/ The-largest-turtle-in-the-world/

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FearlessLeader-Leonardo chapter 1 . 5/5/2017
Dawww! I especially loved this fanfic! It was fantastic!
Me chapter 1 . 8/22/2016
Awwwwwww , raph has a fluffy side, if i tell you i'm screaming in my ands (of cuttenes) you belive me?
Orange Dash chapter 1 . 4/21/2016
This made me grin. Loved the moment between Raph and Mikey!
ravenshell chapter 1 . 4/11/2016
Whoops, Mike was almost a Darwin Awards winner... That'll go nicely next to the Battle Nexus trophy, right?

I have to agree with some of the other commenters that the turtles' weights seem way too high... even freaking huge 2014 Raph would probably not be more than 350-400 lbs, and probably a lot of that weight would be the carapace itself.

Also, Raph spins Mikey in a full circle twirl if he turns him 360 degrees. It'd be a 180 turn to just spin him to face him.
CelandineGranger chapter 1 . 4/1/2016
I think you made the turtles quite a bit too heavy, but other than that, this was a cute story. :)
Sweetheart91597 chapter 1 . 10/22/2015
Aww! So sweet! :D
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2015
Cute but the weights are way off.
Each of the turtles is described as having Olymic-like strength, and the world record for the bench press is about 700 llbs. The turtles also only way around 300 llbs each.
flikaroo chapter 1 . 8/17/2015
I adore Raph's devotion to his brothers, now all that weight lifting makes sense! And too often I see guys in the gym stacking up the weights, only to squeak out one, two reps tops. I never understood that. Lift a little less and go for a full 10 to 12 reps instead, I say.
JunjouRomanticafortheWinxoxo chapter 1 . 5/21/2015
This story is so sweet! I love it when Raph shows his true caring and loving self. Poor Mikey was so afraid of Raph getting mad and beating him up for breaking his machine, but little did he realize that Raph was more scared than mad. That's so like Raph to care more about the safety of his brothers than some little machine. I love how he kept reassuring Mikey that he didn't care about the machine. This is some good stuff, great story!
BlackWitchesCat chapter 1 . 5/6/2015
This was so sweet I almost went into a sugar coma
Original1 chapter 1 . 4/22/2015
I never review, but this was such a cute fic and incredibly well-done for a TMNT fic. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2015
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Momobear9898 chapter 1 . 4/19/2015
I absolutely loved this story. No joke. This made me so happy and I immediately texted my friend and told her to check this out even though she knows nothing about TMNT. Absolutely adorable. Great job!
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 1 . 4/19/2015
Aww. Raph is a good brother. But yes...careful while lifting. Also, the couch-lifting scheme was hilarious. I loved it! Clever Leo. :P And as much as Donnie wanted to focus on his project...I have no doubt he'll drop everything to help Mikey, too. When it really counts, the brothers pull together. :)
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